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Open Poetry #17

My Final Exhale

Isaiah
Junior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 15
Atlanta,Ga

0 posted 2001-12-21 03:28 AM

I'm far away and dreaming
Resting in peace and care
Now soaring free
My dreams and me
Away from cruel despair

I'm far away and dreaming
Nevermore a warrior to bleed
Away from the storms
No longer scorned
Moving at furious speeds

I can rest and close my eyes
For now I can finally sleep
A memory I leave
Breaths I don't breathe
I'm eternal, resting in peace

I loved all who loved me
With their condolences in my heart
I'm there in spirit
And here's my lyric
I play it now to a angel's harp

I'm far away and dreaming
With love I can now prevail
Across land and sea
Now soaring free
After my final exhale

-Isaiah

John Yaws
Senior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 860
Texas

1 posted 2001-12-21 03:37 AM

Interesting perspective. It reminded me of a poem I once read, that went something like this..."And Drake is in his hammock, and a thousand miles away". good job.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-12-21 03:45 AM

Isaiah,
this is nice and soft as a final exhale should be. good write
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

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