Dream On... - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-12-19 09:59 PM

Through misty clouds of absent love
arrives my answer from above
A knock upon the broken door
to prove again, what was before.

He came through time to make a stand
to love with me, to be my man
on horse of white, his valiant steed
he shows himself, just who I need.

In fantasy, he's cloaked in gold
his purpose, to tell stories old
of days of wine, and knights of rose
of open heart, no longer closed.

A moonbeam lit, to show his way
to happiness returned today
but only if I sleep it through
for with the dawn, my loss..anew.

Elizabeth

Moderator

Member Ascendant

since 1999-06-07

Posts 6871
Minnesota

1 posted 2001-12-19 10:05 PM

Nicely written....it flowed well and seemed to dance, although it was sad....hugs Sandra.

God bless America, my home sweet home.

thepoeticplumber
Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 185

2 posted 2001-12-19 10:05 PM

That was a beautiful dream, even though it had a sad ending. It was written with excellent word talent . Thank you Roger

[This message has been edited by thepoeticplumber (12-19-2001 10:08 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2001-12-19 10:09 PM

(smiles) Oh Sandra, you always paint such enchanting fantasies, love always fills your words! (kiss on cheek) May you dream on and find all your dreams come true very soon when love falls into your arms forever! (sigh) Always believe in your heart and your dreams will come true! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Tennessee Angel
Senior Member

since 2000-06-03

Posts 661
Tennessee

4 posted 2001-12-19 10:24 PM

What a wonderful piece you've written here. I, too, often wish I could hold on to those dreams for just a few more minutes. Lovely!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-12-19 11:58 PM

Oh so sad, but don't you just love those dreams while they last? Sandra, this was a treat to read, it flowed beautifully.

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-12-20 12:01 PM

Oh gosh...do I ever know this feeling. It is my dreams that keep me sane and give me just a little bit of hope. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2001-12-20 12:09 PM

Sandra darling girl, I promise dreams do come true you know. Wonderful writing from you I love the flow and it's utterly excellent
Really well written and a really great piece from you today

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

8 posted 2001-12-20 12:40 PM

wow.......I love this

such a keeper!!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2001-12-20 01:20 AM

When we least expect it, our dreams may not come true but they can be fulfilled.
You sound content.

I wish you much happiness and joy.
Happy Holidays Sandra.

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

10 posted 2001-12-20 04:33 AM

excellent poetry...

regards,
sudhir

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

11 posted 2001-12-20 02:04 PM

Sandra,

I love rhyme with perfect flow. You do it so well.

And what a nice dream, too.

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

12 posted 2001-12-20 02:06 PM

It may be only me, but I didn't see that ending coming. The story kept me intrigued to read on to the next stanza. I enjoyed reading this.

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

13 posted 2001-12-20 02:43 PM

The loss of a dream upon waking...yet another reason to stay in bed. Great write, Sandra.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

14 posted 2001-12-20 06:28 PM

Sandra, this flows so softly, like a quiet dream on a misty night. Hug those pillows and keep dreaming, and writing.

strbbux
Member Elite

since 2001-12-19

Posts 3859

15 posted 2001-12-20 06:42 PM

"A moonbeam lit, to show his way" such nice lines,, it flowed so nicely, strbbux

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

16 posted 2001-12-20 09:54 PM

catalinamoon - a great flow of words, telling as always. A twist thrown at the ending that I didn't expect when you woke. Nicely done...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

17 posted 2001-12-21 01:40 AM

At least you're having fabulous dreams...hoping they will soon come true for you...James

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

18 posted 2001-12-21 05:02 AM

Sandra,
dreamy write.
Dream on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.