Open Poetry #17 |
Looking To Tomorrow |
GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
I’m looking to tomorrow for all my today’s are spent I’m looking to tomorrow for the day to be brighter I’ll sit by the window all night and wait for the sun to rise, to shine through these panes and convince me it is alright My eyes are tired of yesterday and are refusing to go on, so sun convince them to stay awake and to await what you can bring Please shine over my darkened domain so I can spot the soul I lost, and the heart I gave away The one of a hopeful little boy Trickle throughout my dwelling Dance off my walls and floors I know I’m asking a lot of you, but this beggar’s cup is an abyss So I’ll look to tomorrow for there’s nothing left in today I’m looking to tomorrow for I’ve got no where else to turn © David 2001 [This message has been edited by GenXer (12-21-2001 12:37 AM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
David, Welcome to Passions You have NO idea how much I can relate to this poem right now. I think you have read my mind..lol. Well done... I look forward to seeing much more from you Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (12-21-2001 12:43 AM).] |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
Hey Dave, Wow ... good to see you again. As you'd guessed, yes, indeed, it is the same Michelle from the old MT. I have made my way here, and I'm glad you did the same . Welcome! I have appreciated your comments on my pieces, and I look forward to interacting with you again . Nice write, by the way. Glad I was one of the first to reply to your first post here. We all should look toward tomorrow with open hearts and hopeful souls. Thanks for the read. Take care. ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
Now you days are up and coming and your time is ripe for change guitars are strumming! Sounds sad, when you look at how important health is all the other problems seem to melt away..and health means staying healthy like avoiding anxiety and worry.Welcome, my friend. |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Tara - Thanks for welcoming me with open arms, and thanks for reading. Most people usually get great joy in snubbing me, and throwing me out on my but.lol Michelle - It is good to see you here as well. I liked your use of the faces, they were all well placed.lol Thanks for tuning in. Dave |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Thanks Martin. Hey, one thing I have is plenty of health.lol By the way, I liked the saying you put in your comment. Dave |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Welcome to Passions. "Trickle throughout my dwelling Dance off my walls and floors I know I’m asking a lot of you, but this beggar’s cup is an abyss" This is very good! Hope your poems keep trickling across these blue pages. Your cup will never be empty or lost in here. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GenXer~ Welcome to Passions~ 'I’m looking to tomorrow for all my today’s are spent I’m looking to tomorrow for the day to be brighter' Well .. I hope they ARE brighter for you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Hey Dave, now you went and done, wrote pure beauty with a lot of soul. I'm gonna hafta get Nan to get her eraser out to reduce the competition. lol. Welcome to the blue pages. *HuGS* Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This is an achingly beautiful write of emotion. One many can relate to, Im sure. Welcome to Poetry Land. I look forward to more of your work, nice to have you here. take care jm You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Dave, welcome to Passions! I note from one of your replies that you get "kicked out". Well my new friend, read the guidelines, play by the rules, and you will have found yourself a new home! I for one enjoyed your writing, and as Sunshine, hereby beam you aboard! Check your e-mail for a special greeting! Karilea |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Welcome to passisons. This is very good. And I hope your days are much brighter from now on. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Dave,I`m glad to see you posting here.I know you`re going to love it.And I bet I know why you`re looking toward tomorrow.You know its just a matter of time before you find your true love. Juanita |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!! Very nice first post! I will be looking for more of yours. Make yourself at home. ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Dave darling boy Hi there, yes you know 'tis me Marsha The wench has been waiting for you darling boy. You know how much you love being singed I've missed your writing love, I'm sooooooo glad you got here. And stop teasing everyone here you know you are a brilliant writer and you've never been kicked anywhere. They don't know you like the gang do darling boy, they'll learn that you are sooooooooooo great. I did tell you this was absolutely perfect didn't I? Good it is, sheer poetry As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Joe Lamando Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 124Massachusetts,USA |
Hi David, Very well done And welcome to PIP Joe Lamando |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
I didn't know that you wrote FV, Dave. Well written and intriguing, indeed. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Welcome here to Passions, Dave! That was a beautiful first post...filled with lots of emotion. I am so happy that you decided to come over here where so many of your good friends are hanging out! copyright2001 Lyra Nesius "poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks [This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (12-21-2001 12:31 PM).] |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Wow! I can't believe how busy this site is. Thanks everyone for reading and your more then generous comments. It is good to see a lot of old (moontowners, you know who you are) and new faces. Dave [This message has been edited by GenXer (12-22-2001 12:04 PM).] |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
It seems my reply doesn't want to go to the top. Let me try again. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I’m looking to tomorrow for all my today’s are spent I’m looking to tomorrow for the day to be brighter I’ll sit by the window all night and wait for the sun to rise, to shine through these panes and convince me it is alright My eyes are tired of yesterday and are refusing to go on, so sun convince them to stay awake and to await what you can bring Please shine over my darkened domain so I can spot the soul I lost, and the heart I gave away The one of a hopeful little boy Trickle throughout my dwelling Dance off my walls and floors I know I’m asking a lot of you, but this beggar’s cup is an abyss So I’ll look to tomorrow for there’s nothing left in today I’m looking to tomorrow for I’ve got no where else to turn ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ David, me too, me too!!!!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Kathleen - Thanks for reading, and it is good to hear I will have company when I wait for the sun to rise tomorrow. Dave |
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