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GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

0 posted 2001-12-21 12:35 PM

I’m looking to tomorrow
for all my today’s are spent
I’m looking to tomorrow
for the day to be brighter

I’ll sit by the window all night
and wait for the sun to rise,
to shine through these panes
and convince me it is alright

My eyes are tired of yesterday
and are refusing to go on,
so sun convince them to stay awake
and to await what you can bring

Please shine over my darkened domain
so I can spot the soul I lost,
and the heart I gave away
The one of a hopeful little boy

Trickle throughout my dwelling
Dance off my walls and floors
I know I’m asking a lot of you,
but this beggar’s cup is an abyss

So I’ll look to tomorrow
for there’s nothing left in today
I’m looking to tomorrow
for I’ve got no where else to turn

© David 2001

[This message has been edited by GenXer (12-21-2001 12:37 AM).]

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

1 posted 2001-12-21 12:43 PM

David,

Welcome to Passions

You have NO idea how much I can relate to this poem right now. I think you have read my mind..lol. Well done... I look forward to seeing much more from you

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
- Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (12-21-2001 12:43 AM).]

DarkAngelChelle
Member

since 2001-12-06

Posts 87
Kansas

2 posted 2001-12-21 12:43 PM

Hey Dave,

Wow ... good to see you again. As you'd guessed, yes, indeed, it is the same Michelle from the old MT. I have made my way here, and I'm glad you did the same

. Welcome!

I have appreciated your comments on my pieces, and I look forward to interacting with you again

.
Nice write, by the way. Glad I was one of the first to reply to your first post here. We all should look toward tomorrow with open hearts and hopeful souls. Thanks for the read. Take care.

~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2001-12-21 12:48 PM

Now you days are up and coming
and your time is ripe for change
guitars are strumming!

Sounds sad, when you look at how important health is all the other problems seem to melt away..and health means staying healthy like avoiding anxiety and worry.Welcome, my friend.

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

4 posted 2001-12-21 12:51 PM

Tara - Thanks for welcoming me with open arms, and thanks for reading. Most people usually get great joy in snubbing me, and throwing me out on my but.lol

Michelle - It is good to see you here as well. I liked your use of the faces, they were all well placed.lol Thanks for tuning in.

Dave

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

5 posted 2001-12-21 12:53 PM

Thanks Martin. Hey, one thing I have is plenty of health.lol By the way, I liked the saying you put in your comment.

Dave

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2001-12-21 02:14 AM

Welcome to Passions.

"Trickle throughout my dwelling
Dance off my walls and floors
I know I’m asking a lot of you,
but this beggar’s cup is an abyss"

This is very good! Hope your poems keep trickling across these blue pages. Your cup will never be empty or lost in here.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

7 posted 2001-12-21 02:27 AM

GenXer~
Welcome to Passions~

'I’m looking to tomorrow
for all my today’s are spent
I’m looking to tomorrow
for the day to be brighter'

Well .. I hope they ARE brighter for you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

8 posted 2001-12-21 03:15 AM

Hey Dave,
now you went and done, wrote pure beauty with a lot of soul. I'm gonna hafta get Nan to get her eraser out to reduce the competition. lol.
Welcome to the blue pages.
*HuGS*
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

9 posted 2001-12-21 08:01 AM

This is an achingly beautiful write of emotion. One many can relate to, Im sure.
Welcome to Poetry Land.
I look forward to more of your work, nice to have you here.
take care
jm

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2001-12-21 08:07 AM

Dave, welcome to Passions! I note from one of your replies that you get "kicked out". Well my new friend, read the guidelines, play by the rules, and you will have found yourself a new home! I for one enjoyed your writing, and as Sunshine, hereby beam you aboard!

Check your e-mail for a special greeting!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

11 posted 2001-12-21 08:26 AM

Welcome to passisons. This is very good. And I hope your days are much brighter from now on.

N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

12 posted 2001-12-21 08:56 AM

Dave,I`m glad to see you posting here.I know you`re going to love it.And I bet I know why you`re looking toward tomorrow.You know its just a matter of time before you find your true love.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

13 posted 2001-12-21 09:03 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!

Very nice first post!
I will be looking for more of yours.
Make yourself at home.

~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

14 posted 2001-12-21 10:51 AM

Dave darling boy Hi there, yes you know 'tis me Marsha

The wench has been waiting for you darling boy. You know how much you love being singed

I've missed your writing love, I'm sooooooo glad you got here.

Welcome Home

And stop teasing everyone here you know you are a brilliant writer and you've never been kicked anywhere. They don't know you like the gang do darling boy, they'll learn that you are sooooooooooo great.

I did tell you this was absolutely perfect didn't I? Good it is, sheer poetry
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Joe Lamando
Member

since 2001-11-20

Posts 124
Massachusetts,USA

15 posted 2001-12-21 10:57 AM

Hi David,
Very well done
And welcome to PIP

Joe Lamando

Opeth
Senior Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

16 posted 2001-12-21 11:07 AM

I didn't know that you wrote FV, Dave. Well written and intriguing, indeed.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

17 posted 2001-12-21 12:29 PM

Welcome here to Passions, Dave!
That was a beautiful first post...filled with lots of emotion.
I am so happy that you decided to come over here where so many of your good friends are hanging out!

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

[This message has been edited by Madame Chipmunk (12-21-2001 12:31 PM).]

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

18 posted 2001-12-22 11:50 AM

Wow! I can't believe how busy this site is. Thanks everyone for reading and your more then generous comments. It is good to see a lot of old (moontowners, you know who you are) and new faces.

Dave

[This message has been edited by GenXer (12-22-2001 12:04 PM).]

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

19 posted 2001-12-22 12:05 PM

It seems my reply doesn't want to go to the top. Let me try again.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

20 posted 2001-12-22 06:16 PM

I’m looking to tomorrow
for all my today’s are spent
I’m looking to tomorrow
for the day to be brighter

I’ll sit by the window all night
and wait for the sun to rise,
to shine through these panes
and convince me it is alright

My eyes are tired of yesterday
and are refusing to go on,
so sun convince them to stay awake
and to await what you can bring

Please shine over my darkened domain
so I can spot the soul I lost,
and the heart I gave away
The one of a hopeful little boy

Trickle throughout my dwelling
Dance off my walls and floors
I know I’m asking a lot of you,
but this beggar’s cup is an abyss

So I’ll look to tomorrow
for there’s nothing left in today
I’m looking to tomorrow
for I’ve got no where else to turn
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

David, me too, me too!!!!!!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

21 posted 2001-12-23 03:53 PM

Kathleen - Thanks for reading, and it is good to hear I will have company when I wait for the sun to rise tomorrow.

Dave

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