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kaile
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0 posted 2001-12-22 08:30 AM


my existence,

justified by
the gatherings i can secure
in a week

i'm bothered that
my driftwood isn't found

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Kethry
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1 posted 2001-12-22 08:33 AM


Faterider,
I found this piece of driftwood and I don't know what to do with it...fantastic work.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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2 posted 2001-12-22 09:06 AM


Good one here faterider!  I love these!
(The snowflakes melt on your tongue
before your tongue can freeze!)  
*Happy Holidays*
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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3 posted 2001-12-22 09:14 AM


Faterider,
It's a common thing and an uncommon poem.

MARK V SHELDON
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4 posted 2001-12-22 11:05 AM


Very engaging, faterider.  I like this one.

-MVS

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5 posted 2001-12-23 02:27 PM


Haha... Interesting way you compare the number of gatherings u can secure with a piece of driftwood...

Aww... your holidays ain't that bad. I'm sure u got to meet some interesting people And grab some of your friends out to celebrate this X'mas!!

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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6 posted 2001-12-23 03:59 PM




(smiles) So wonderfully written, sweet friend, I love these twenty or less poems! I think I'm going to have to try one myself! (big hugggssssss) BRAVO!!! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Heng, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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