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Suetang
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Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-20 07:06 PM


A gold box with a big red bow
I have spied under the Christmas tree
And according to the label
That little gold box is for me

What could it be I wonder?
I have everything I need
I have plenty of love around me
And enough food for me to feed

But as I open up the box
I get a wonderful surprise
Poetic words of love for me
Such a feast for my eyes

The handwriting is familiar
As I read these words from you
They tell of how much you love me
And for me there's nothing you wouldn't do

I can't contain my happiness
For I've received the greatest gift of all
Your words have warmed my heart
And made me feel about 10 feet tall

The gift of love is priceless
So cherish it and watch it grow
Tell somebody that you love them
And you'll feel a warm inner glow


Suetang

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1 posted 2001-12-20 09:11 PM


Sue...I find it hard to believe this little
touching poem has a goose egg next to it..
Certainly deserves looking at....Much
enjoyed...We should all have a little gold
box.  With those beautiful words inside.

Startime
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2 posted 2001-12-20 09:15 PM


Just give your love away
Let it nuture and grow
Give a smile as you say
Those words I love you so

**big hugs** I absolutely love this poem...It is indeed the perfect Christmas present. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-20 09:23 PM


SueTang~

A beautifully written thought~

Happy Holidays to you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
       noles1@totcon.com                  

Larry C
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4 posted 2001-12-20 11:52 PM


Sue,
Great write. Words of truth for sure. Lovely.

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5 posted 2001-12-20 11:59 PM




(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, love is the greatest gift anyone could ever for a present! (sigh) May you forever cherish these sweet words of love as he will do the same! (kiss on cheek) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, your words are a treasure to us all! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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6 posted 2001-12-21 12:00 PM


Truer words were never spoken Sue.  There is absolutely no gift of more value to another than the gift of love.  Thank you for this very timely, and beautiful piece.

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

vlraynes
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7 posted 2001-12-22 12:03 PM



Suetang-
   Beautifully penned thoughts.
   Enjoyed this.
   Hugs,
   ~Vicky


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2001-12-22 12:44 PM


This is the best gift...James
Irish Rose
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9 posted 2001-12-22 06:14 PM


very true and very lovely thoughts here!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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