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If The Table Turned
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If The Table Turned |
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Isaiah Junior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 15Atlanta,Ga |
I'm just not prepared to court you as my wife If your glass of trust isn't full How can you trust me for life Your past seems to clash with your feelings for me How could you marry someone without full trust and security On a silver platter I cater to you my trust I also spoon feed your heart my love, yet it's not enough Yes I do love you and worship you like a Goddess But your past hurt isn't all out So you don't trust me to be honest So why should I court you if you don't believe I'll be true If this was vice-versa, think about it...would you? If you catered your heart to me to get back nintey percent of mine in return You'd think twice about marrying me if this table was turned -Isaiah |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
Enjoyed your poem, you did a great job showing how trust is an important part of relationships. Happy Holidays, and a Merry New Year to you and all  |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Isaiah, I know just how you feel; trust and acceptance are what makes a true marriage healthy and loving. (sigh) Find whatever makes your heart happy that you can trust, and you will be very happy forever in love! (sigh) So sad but beautiful, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Isaiah, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Well said... I like this! ~Tier |
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