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ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

0 posted 2001-12-20 06:08 PM

season window fronts dressed in cotton snow
stately fashions on mannequins lit from below...
material cuts lie open for warmer seasons lend
to crisply dressed women decked in the latest of fur trends

Is there any logic to where the look will go next?
bust lines migrate down in winter, who will contest;
is it a classic garb her man has chosen for an evening
on the town
or is it a somber gown to wear when her lover's in the ground?

I admire the new looks, dress designers portray
am the man in a time machine eyeing women fashion displays;
watching cotton fabrics gently kiss the flesh about
the knee,
as women wonder next where their garters will next be.

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-20-2001 06:15 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-20 06:45 PM

(sigh) Such a powerful thought on fashion, dearest friend, I too wonder where they'll go next! (big hugggssssss) You always express your thoughts so wonderfully! We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martin, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

2 posted 2001-12-20 07:26 PM

Hi darling boy, I see you made it here, well done

Welcome

Wonderful writing love, I also miss being able to see the poem as I review but never mind we can always use the back button

I absolutely adore this poem it is truly outstanding. I particularly love this

Is there any logic to where the look will go next?
bust lines migrate down in winter, who will contest;
is it a classic garb her man has chosen for an evening
on the town
or is it a somber gown to wear when her lover's in the ground?
Absolutely wonderful
Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

3 posted 2001-12-20 07:27 PM

Mistletoe,

for responding with such affection I am touched, you too have a way with romantic
words.

Marsha,

Thanks for clicking in..I wonder if I can soon step into writing some more romantic genre??! Stay tuned.
There is a 'bunch' of us now here amid all the lovely virtual Xmas decorations! Happy holidays!

[This message has been edited by ecrivan (12-20-2001 07:30 PM).]

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2001-12-20 07:39 PM

watching cotton fabrics gently kiss the flesh about
the knee,
as women wonder next where their garters will next be.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Cute and very true write here Martin.
I don't believe I have read you before...
perhaps missed your entrance.
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
~Hugs, Nancy~

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

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