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Non Sequitur
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Non Sequitur |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Non sequitur Non sequitur of true and false Hinges the door of paradise. The swing is like a dance, a waltz A beat of slow and sound advice They say discussion clears the wear To release the dogma of mad A pressure valve that drains the air To relinquish the core of sad Then lucid moments fly about Enter into the music score. They make you bow away your doubt And open up your eyes once more. You must learn the confidence game The rules are non sequitur blue You file them in your mind of aim And learn about the false of true. Be there a man with soul so dead That has not changed his mind in bed? |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Then lucid moments fly about Enter into the music score. .... WOW, my friend... your words never fail to impress the reader... regards, sudhir |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Then lucid moments fly about Enter into the music score. They make you bow away your doubt And open up your eyes once more. You must learn the confidence game The rules are non sequitur blue You file them in your mind of aim And learn about the false of true. Be there a man with soul so dead That has not changed his mind in bed? ======================================== When you wrap your wit & wisdom in rhyme the words non sequitur never come to mind. very very cool poem Stinky ... those closing couplets are worth their weight in poetic gold. Love the word play in this ... (and the poet who's playing)  *ww*  meYou're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
There's nothing Non Sequitur about you, dear Sy... and that's the true and false of it...  |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"You file them in your mind of aim And learn about the false of true." the rhythm of this is so great..... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I feel the tantalizing draw of bringing back my own non-sequiter romance...and I just might do that... I note a hint of melancholy, but I would think that all be jolly for the Moth has come on by to join the dance of butterfly... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, Thank you for the WOW my friend. JM, You are the butterfly in my fly. Winkiewinkie Randy Stinky Nan, Feel the same about you. *L* Sea, Did the boat rock? LOL *L* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, I needed you today, it got a little cool down here. *L* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
the boat rocks in perfect rhythm always |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sea, That's good. *L* |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Always grateful to see our Sy change his mind, even if in bed  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* another superb gem from your hand Sey. thank you for sharing this beauty Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) There are times when we feel terribly melancholy inside, but there will always be silver linings in every inch of gray, and lucid thoughts will always fill our mind with confidence and joy! (big hugggsssssss) Wonderfully emotional, sweet friend, we all love you so much! (big huggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Lady. *L* Charisma, Thank you for the read and WOW. *L* Noah, Thank you for the nice comment. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"Then lucid moments fly about Enter into the music score. They make you bow away your doubt And open up your eyes once more." Then more lucid notes *sigh* followed by the the crescendo, "Be there a man with soul so dead That has not changed his mind in bed?" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun, Wonderful comment, thank you. |
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