Open Poetry #17 |
Silence of her Deep |
BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Drifting out upon the sea, in the silence of her deep, shines a light from off the coast a beacon that alternates and maps a course. Uncertain in her surroundings she had lost her way before, charting familiar waters her turmoil comes in waves. The sound of the sea ebbs and flows, changing with the tides. Suspended beneath the clouds dancing upon the wind. Moving slowly out and faraway, stars reflect in knowing eyes. Hands that cannot touch nor reach across the oceans. In a rush to hush and calm the storm, turbulent and tormenting in her depths. An undertow pulls her down, quiet in the silence of her deep. It is the light that shines, musical movements that come in waves weathering every storm. The sea has never failed in all her majesty, stirring in her misery her personal quest to persevere. As her calm returns mysterious and peaceful content within her own elements, that which she cannot change. Shimmers in the darkness casting shadows, in the silence of her deep. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"The sea has never failed in all her majesty, stirring in her misery her personal quest to persevere. As her calm returns mysterious and peaceful content within her own elements, that which she cannot change. Shimmers in the darkness casting shadows, in the silence of her deep." ok, most of the poem I know but I love this part!! I am so keeping this poem Fantastic!! |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are so nice to say so, and I'm so glad you are 'so keeping this.' I am so the ~sea~ except when I come here, since you got here first. : ) Thank you so much ~SEA~ |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
a wonderful write... regards, sudhir |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
That is such an incredible line "In the silence of her deep" This poem says so much. Sandra |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
BluesSerenade - a most beautifully written serenade of her deep... BC |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my! This poem loves me!! Yes it does! Thank you for this one! *Happy Holidays* ~Hugs, Nancy~ *~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~* |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) This poem loves me too, just as I love your words! (sigh) Soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, such peace and relaxation fills these words, it soothed me! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is a true classic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! Mya love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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