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Heather Miller
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0 posted 2001-12-20 12:22 PM



As I watch you sleeping there
I lay my hand on your forehead
and stroke your hair.
I remember the days
It seems so long ago
when you were so very small
and I was there for your every call.
Now you have grown
You want to be big and do it all on your own.
As I watch you sleeping there
I think to myself
how sometines life is so unfair.
How you grow up so fast
and all I want is the baby years to last.
As I watch you sleeping there
I sit and realize as I stare
Now you are a teen
and I know you think at times that
I'm so unfair and mean
The thing I try to get you to understand
Is I too was once your age and felt the same as you and didn't want my parents helping hand.
One day soon you will be grown
with a family of your own
Then you will see that things weren't all that bad
Then you will understand why at times I seem to feel sad.
As I watch you sleeping there
I lay my hand on your forehead
and stroke your hair.

2001 (c)Heather Miller


Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

[This message has been edited by Heather Miller (12-20-2001 02:31 PM).]

© Copyright 2001 Heather Anne Gambler/Price - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-20 12:28 PM


Heather, I think this poem writes every single Mother's heart and you did it well.  I really enjoyed this one, and stroked my son's forehead many a time at that age.  Loved this one.

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

Heather Miller
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2 posted 2001-12-20 12:32 PM


Thank you so VERY much. I just sat here waiting for a download to finish and "boom" there it was on paper :-)
I just wish it would come that smooth ALL the time LOL :-)

God Bless you and your little one while they are sleeping
Hugs,
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

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3 posted 2001-12-20 09:57 PM


Heather~
It's so good to see you~
This write sure warms this mom's heart~
Went through four of those and still recall those days with such special fondness~

Happy Holidays to you, my friend~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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4 posted 2001-12-20 10:02 PM


Very touching...nothing like watching an innocent child sleep...i often wish i was back in time too watching mine sleep..it was the happiest time in my life..i miss those days...thank you for posting ...

               ~Victoria~

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5 posted 2001-12-20 10:35 PM


Oh yes, children grow up so fast!! I don't have any children but when I do, I will definitely watch them sleep and lend a helping hand always.
Heather Miller
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6 posted 2001-12-20 10:59 PM


Marge: It is good to be back. I have been so busy with our business I haven't had time to put pen to paper Glad I could give a warm memory
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Victoria: Memories are all we have sometimes But as long as they are as sweet as these that's all I need
Thanks for reading †
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RosePetal: One day you will enjoy the memories as well. Just remember they are wonderful times to have.
Thanks a bunch for reading my heart

Hugs to you all and Hope you have a Blessed CHRISTmas †
Heather

Without the experiance of love where would we be? We would have no memories to cherish.
With love it brings hurt with hurt bittersweet memories.

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