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Oh Little Child
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Oh Little Child |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
Oh little child so near the tree The precious view you clearly see Adorned in white, a glistened sight A chilling warmth, it's nearly night Excitement grows within each eye A splendid match, so bright yet shy You make each wish, each secret part A ray with God, so fills your heart Your wants are small, unselfish child Not to be wrapped, branded or styled A world of hope, filled full of peace A caring call, let love increase Next year this child will want to be Back out to watch, this growing tree What of our choice as time rolls by Will hope and peace and love climb high [This message has been edited by thepoeticplumber (12-21-2001 09:39 PM).] |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Roger You know how much I love this one...beautiful Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"A world of hope, filled full of peace A caring call, let love increase" I like this very much  |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This is pretty! I especially love the lines that SEA just pointed out! Nicely penned poem your new friend Joanna *wink |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
What a touching piece. Truly beautiful! |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Roger, this is a truly touching bit of poetry, and I hope you will be around to bring it out every Christmas Season for as long as Passions is around. Thank you for sharing your heart... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Beautiful piece! Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (tears fall down my cheeks) Oh my gosh, this is soooooo lovely, my heart sings out to this child. (sigh) May love and peace forever be with this child as will hope always shine above! (sigh) Sooooo adorable, sweet friend, this made me cry tears of joy! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Roger this is siperb writing absolutely excellent I love the whole of this poem truly fabulous As always Mushy    To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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his poet II Junior Member
since 2001-12-20
Posts 18 |
I enjoyed your poem very much. It was warm, touching and filled with hope. All the things Christmas should be. Cheryl |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is full of hope and beauty, as this time should be. Sandra |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
I Thank you all for the very kind messages you made on this Christmas poem. God Bless us everyone. Roger |
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