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Open Poetry #17
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amusemi
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A State of Disarray
0 posted 2001-12-19 07:50 PM

Walking through you,
Is like
Walking through corridors.
Banging on doors,
Until-
When in exasperation-
I cry out,
And you finally
Let me in.

Only to discover,
That there lies ahead,
Another corridor,
And I pray my hands won't bleed!


p. Exp/Journal of Art and Lit. 1988
© Copyright 2001 kat fer - All Rights Reserved
mirror man
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1 posted 2001-12-19 10:54 PM

Very interesting poem.  Well done.  
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with you
2 posted 2001-12-20 12:42 PM

makes me think of trying to navigate someone's heart.....I like this
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