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Titia Geertman
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0 posted 2001-12-19 06:49 PM


Imaginary for class you see
But I haven't the faintest idea
Does that matter???


I'm talking to my plants you know and they talk back to me
Some plants I visit every day and some I hardly see
I have to wait till Spring again for they are sleeping now
They shut their doors in wintertime and stay alive somehow
But at the first site of some green I'm there with softly voice
Encourage them to grow and bloom in colors of their choice
Spring is a difficult time for me and yet a happy one too
They all will waken from their sleep but I want it faster I do
I tell them roses 'come on you guys' I've waited long enough
Don't disapoint me now you see I gave you all that stuff
I threw some grains for you to eat embedded you in earth
'Come on' I tell them every day that must be something worth
I clipped your hair wich grew too wild so you will look real nice
But how I plead and how I scream they won't take my advice
'It is too cold yet' they tell me, 'when we should grow too fast
and then at a late winterfrost we're not convinced we'll last'
So we will stay behind closed doors till sun will shine us hot
And then perhaps we will show you all the surprises we've got'
But I'll keep talking to those roses and all the other plants
On my knees I plead to the sun for the warmth she sends
You may believe it or you may not but I think this is the way
For every summer my garden if full of blooming plants I say




A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
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Irish Rose
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1 posted 2001-12-19 06:52 PM


Titia, I do the same thing, my houseplants are very happy creatures also!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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2 posted 2001-12-19 06:53 PM


Titia, this was absolutely precious!  I truly hope to meet you one day, and I hope I will see your garden (and I am serious too!)  pssst - I talk to my plants too and it works doesn't it?  I don't know about you but my roses are awesome!

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

Duncan
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3 posted 2001-12-19 11:21 PM


I have a garden and I talk to the plants, also.  Unfortunately, the weeds listen in and grow even faster.  It doesn't yet even feel like winter here but this sure made me wish spring would hurry round.
Nan
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4 posted 2001-12-20 09:51 AM


Talking flowers = personification, my friend...
That's successful imaginary imagery..

Sudhir Iyer
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5 posted 2001-12-20 09:54 AM


lovely...

regards,
sudhir

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-12-20 12:16 PM


Titia,
My plants it seems have ennui
They simply will not talk to me.
But they do smile after awhile.
A lovely write. *L*

His Poet
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7 posted 2001-12-20 12:41 PM


Very enjoyable poem. Such lovely gifts plants bestow on us. I love to have something that blooms in fall and winter so I have mums and camelia bushes. That keeps me content until spring comes again. Cheryl
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