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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-12-19 05:17 PM

I have fallen In love with you,
As you call my name,
I come running to you,
As the night comes along,
Love stays the same,
Never changes,
only the weather changes,
And you know why?
It is because of your love,
your love makes so alive ,
so alive
In love
when you come closer to me,
I feel that
I could sing the song,
of love
Because your love so tender,
And the day will come soon,
With your sweet love
surrender my heart and soul,
As you walk In this open door,
and there Is long way
to brighten the day,
you came closer to me,
I see
something In your eyes,
that makes my heart go crazy,
when you come closer to me,
I feel the same,
As you call my name,
and sing
with the words
I was longing to hear,
you say
the words forever
and when you come closer to me
Why my heart beats faster
And I whisper
Into your ears
I love you
with all my heart,
When you
come closer to me
come closer to me....

Bec
Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 475
Canberra

1 posted 2001-12-19 05:19 PM

vandana...

Wow! This is great! I could feel the rush of emotion as I read this wonderful piece.

Bec

"Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you."
-Winnie-the-Pooh

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-12-19 05:51 PM

BRAVO! This is really excellent love poetry Vandana. I think I'll just save this one.

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-12-19 06:04 PM

oh Vandana what a way to show your feelings, you captured love feelings so well......love it

((hugs))
Charisma

~*Theresia~*

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-12-19 06:44 PM

very nice, Vandana!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

5 posted 2001-12-19 08:03 PM

Romantic, great poem.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2001-12-19 08:15 PM

(smiles) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Vandana, you always write the most beautiful love poems! (sigh) I love it!!! You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may love forever rest close to your heart! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

7 posted 2001-12-19 08:22 PM

Very romantic write vandana! Enjoyed, Nancy.

*~ Wishing you all a magical Christmas ~*

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2001-12-19 09:20 PM

vandana - yes, you are in love, and the best to you, from me...

BC

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2001-12-20 01:46 AM

"As you call my name I come running to you."
Very nice writing...James

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

10 posted 2001-12-20 04:38 PM

Vandana, you are growing in your writing. I look forward to more!

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