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When Nighttime Comes
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When Nighttime Comes |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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When Nighttime Comes ~*Marge Tindal*~ When nighttime comes to lay across a sorrowed breast, in heaving sobs that will not let the tired body rest. I will take your tears, hold them until dawn, where they will dissipate upon the rise of sun. Gently I will hold your soul-shedding until all your fears allay. Come sweet friend, take my hand, let us face the new day. Remembering perchance a smile before the tears began to fall In softly remembered thoughts when she was your all~ *For Jack Allen, in memory of Pat Holding you in your sorrow~ Sharing with you in your faith~ December 18, 2001 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well writ. |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
The sentiment weeps of loss. Well written. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
This weeps with the sorrow. This is beautiful. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl you have a heart of gold. Wonderful work, and may peace and love shine on Jack. Wonderful writing and such a blessing you are, to us all, and to me.    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy There ought to be a Margie girl smilie, it would be the most popular smilie ever. I know what it would look like too, it would encompass joy, love and giving.  To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
It touched my head, my heart, my soul It touched the all of me, the whole You sweet girl  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you are truly a warm hearted lady, and your kindness and love shines within your words. God bless you dear Marge ((hugs)) Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
Marge... What a wonderful friend you are. And what a beautiful tribute for your friend. Bec  "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*My friends ... thank you ... I would ask that you take a moment to remember my cousin, Jack, in your prayers. He lost the soul-mate of his life ... Pat and Jack met in high school, married shortly thereafter and loved each other for 51 beautiful years~ She was such a lovely lady and will be greatly missed by us all~ Thanking each of you for your prayers~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Marge - what very beautiful verses you have written. BC |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is so beautiful, Marge. And, so sweet. |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
 We will, Marge, we will. God bless America, my home sweet home. |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
He will definately be in my prayers! Very lovely write, Marge. [This message has been edited by Tennessee Angel (12-19-2001 10:18 PM).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is such a wonderful dedication, Marge. Your love for both of them shines in every word. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thank you all, kind friends~ I appreciate the prayers and I know Jack does~ You each are a blessing of friendship~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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