Open Poetry #17 |
A Gem for the Lady |
Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Swirling winds through trees, Bending back the evergreens, Too brisk of a breeze. Pull up your collars, Walking in this wonderland Cheeks will get color. Left over leaves fly, Searching for a winter home, Briefly spot the sky. Hide inside from snow, To warm beside the fire, It’s where lovers go. We’ll watch together as the snow piles high, We’ll stay together and not say goodbye. Bill |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A lovely Sen-Sonn for the Lady, indeed...and a veritable Keeper... watching fall leafing with summer's hope gone on breeze winter springs again [This message has been edited by Lady In White (12-19-2001 09:59 AM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Oh Son, this is soooooo beautiful, I love it! (big hugggsssss) May your sweet love always swoon to your lovely words you write! (sigh) I love it, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Lady, A sen-sonn, I like that better than my name for it. Nice Haika? return Noah, You are always so sweet and kind with your praise Bill |
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His Poet Senior Member
since 2001-12-18
Posts 750 |
Very nice imagery, Bill. I enjoyed this very much. It reminds me of the lyrics, "oh, the weather outside is frightful but the fire is so delightful." Warm and toasty. Cheryl |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
His Poet/Cheryl Now that you mention it, yet it does, I guess those images of romance are felt by many and expressed in different ways. Bill |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
What a perfect gem of romance for the lady...what better way to spend a snowy evening than this. Delightful. I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Startime, Now all I need is that snowy night, too warm here, and I’d like some for that Christmas spirit. Can you send me some? Bill |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
well, I say let it snow! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Kay, Indeed! I would love to see some snow, but I wouldn’t go out driving in it, the people around here get CRAZY when it snows two flakes Bill |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Bill,here in NC we don`t get to cuddle to much because of snow.I love the romance in this Juanita |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SonNetier~ What a lovely presentation of inspiring thoughts~ Thank you for sharing~ Within the embers Burns a bright thought of the heart Stirred by magic thoughts Bursting into warming flames Softly speaking of your name~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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