Open Poetry #17 |
Dear Santa |
N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
A little girl on bended knees. She asks Santa why doesn`t anyone love me? I try to be good most of the time. But sometimes I do get out of line. My parents don`t love me I know this to be true. They`re always saying what were we thinking when we had you? Santa please find me somewhere else to stay. Sometimes they`ll beat me once or twice a day. Santa knew he couldn`t do this all alone. He would need God to find this little girl a home. God answered this little girls prayer. A wonderful couple took her out of there. She is now in a home filled with so much love. Everyday she thanks Santa and God up above. Juanita |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I know it's trite to say there is a reason for everything, but just like a season for all, this is so true... thank you for sharing... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(tears fall down my cheeks) God Bless that sweet little girl, I'm so happy she got a loving family to watch over her and love her! (sad sigh) I burst in tears reading this to feel the sorrow and pain and abuse she had, but only smiling in the end to see her loving foster parents hold her close and love her with cheer. (sigh) God Bless You, sweet Juanita, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Juanita, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* oh gosh.....I wish all the little ones that live that way could be helped. My heart breaks for them all. Thank you for this touching poem that brought tears to my heart and soul. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Sunshine,thanks so much for reading this.I don`t even know why I thought of this.Maybe its bcause there are so many children that don`t have a home. Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Noah,you always have such sweet replies.Thank you! Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Startime,wouldn`t it be wonderful if all the children in the world could have a loving home?Thank you Juanita |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
awww so sad, but with a happy ending! Children are so precious and they should never be treated badly. (hugs) |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
[This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (12-18-2001 02:41 PM).] |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love sad poems when they have a happy ending, Juanita...and this one is very special. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Juanita - Such a sweet and uplifting write. This is a great little story. By the way I like the new name. What do you think of mine? Dave |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Juanita - Such a sweet and uplifting write. This is a great little story. By the way I like the new name. What do you think of mine? Dave |
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GenXer Senior Member
since 2001-12-15
Posts 583USA |
Juanita - Such a sweet and uplifting write. This is a great little story. By the way I like the new name. What do you think of mine? Dave |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Juanita, Used to do Child Protective Service work. A flood of memories you resurrect here. Lovely write and for once a lovely ending. Bless you. |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
This is so touching. Really makes one stop and think, doesn't it. If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Juanita darling girl I cannot believe it NOW YOU'VE joined Keth in making me sob, How could you???? Okay this is wonderful writing and it has a happy ending BUT darling girl how treacherous of you. I don't know, its a conspirousy that's what it is. I'd fill this up with lots of weeping pics but I can't do that anymore. So I'll just have to think about getting my revenge. It's no use you hiding behind Lyra darling girl I'll find you see if I don't. This means a duel I'll be back later with my dueling piece prepare to surrender As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Juanita, how absolutely perfect for this season of goodwill, now this gives me hope that my work in child protection are not in vain. **HuGS** Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
rosepetal,I agree wholeheartedly a child should never be mistreated. Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Lyra,thank you my friend.TAKE CARE! Love,Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Dave,its good to see you here I love your new name. Thanks for reading by friend. Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Larry,thank you I wish all of the children like this could have a happy ending> Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Tracey,thank you so much for reading this. Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Marsha,I`m sorry this made you cry It just goes to show you have a heart of pure gold Juanita |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Kethry,thank you so much! Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (12-19-2001 11:19 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Juanita darling girl I've not forgotten I got distracted with Mistletoe and kisses but the duel is still on. And you have plenty of your own talent kid, you don't need any of mine. But don't think I don't know what you're trying to do, and don't think you can get out of it by being a darling, you can't. You just knew I wouldn't forget didn't you. I'll be back soon As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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