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Isaiah
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since 2001-12-19
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Atlanta,Ga

0 posted 2001-12-19 02:08 AM



Another sad poem
for the next sad soul
More relative truth for
another heart out of control

Another poem of dusk for
the next less than precious
I bless these words to the
next suffering innocent essence

Another lyric for the
lonesome and disenchanted
Oh how can I forget
all the hopless romantics

One love to all the beautiful
and good dying young
May the meek inherit and charish
where this poem is coming from

Because this is from another
broken heart that's also innocent
From me to you for all
of our mutual lament

This is dedicated to us all
who live in solitude's home
Relative feelings we all share
in another sad poem

-Isaiah


© Copyright 2001 Jerome Isaiah Mitchell - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2001-12-19 05:56 AM


Isaiah,
Welcome to the blue pages. You will do well with sad poems here.
Write on
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Tracey
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2 posted 2001-12-19 06:09 AM


Yes, this is a sad poem indeed. A very nice entrance to passions, I hope we will see more from you. Welcome, and I hope you enjoy it here.

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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3 posted 2001-12-19 09:17 AM



Welcome to Passions, Isaiah...I think you're going to like it here...

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4 posted 2001-12-19 10:05 AM


Isaiah~
Welcome to the pages blue
Hope we will enjoy more from you~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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His Poet
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5 posted 2001-12-19 10:07 AM


You've expressed disenchantment well in your poem. Lovely and sad at the same time. May your spirit be lifted by your writing. Cheryl
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Gaia
6 posted 2001-12-19 12:05 PM


Welcome. This is well penned, a sad and yet comforting huge hug for all lonesome souls.
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