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The Future I Recall
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The Future I Recall |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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~*The Future I Recall*~  Sweet memories drift back to me A smile crosses lips I recollect a time when you were at my fingertips Once upon a romance when we danced 'neath lover's moon When every word in whispered breath would cause my heart to swoon A hug, a kiss...sweet reminisce It seems like yesterday When you were here beside me loving me your gentle way And, now I long to hear your voice Sweet music to my ears To know once more the sound of you after oh so many years Thinking back to hearts entwined How quickly I could fall Can't help but wonder is it 'past' or 'future' I recall ~vlraynes "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Very nicely penned, Vicky. Thoughts to ponder, past or future memories? |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Sweet memories drift back to me A smile crosses lips I recollect a time when you were at my fingertips Once upon a romance when we danced 'neath lover's moon When every word in whispered breath would cause my heart to swoon =========================================== What a lovely reminicse this is Miss Vicky... I love the word play and the romantic phrasing... and what a cool pic..the perfect one for this gem of pen.... tender longing wrapped in rhymes divine... Good to see you back posting girlie.  jm Its not like you to say sorry, |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Superb writing, well done. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Vicky...I just love this...the photo and poem all wrapped up with the perfect last two lines. Splendid writing! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Vicky....we have all been there...I have felt these feelings....remembering back to another day...another love...wondering. This is beautiful...thank you. |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
hmm...wow.. that gave me chills...i guess i've felt like that before...that last line, wondering..sometimes its hard to tell the difference.... this is awesome tricks...really really really like it very much!! hugs, g ~dgvarner/fallen rain~ |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
A very beautiful, romantic poem, Vickie I loved your powerful images.  copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ I believe this is one of your prettiest pieces~ The nostalgically lingering memories are delicately defined ... makes it a 'keeper' piece~ I have read it seven times ... and each time it stirs a new memory~ That's pretty powerful writing that can do that~ Love you, gal~  Bunches and bunches~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done vlraynes...James |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Great write and wonderful picture to have with it. Peaches |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Excellent poem Vicky, nice read |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Vicky, you are sooooooo romantic, this beautiful poem sings with love and yearning! (sigh) May you forever be embraced by the joy of love and have your heart sing your whole future ahead with happiness! (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vicky, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is beautiful, Vicky! Thank you for sharing this. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Wow, simply magnificent! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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Rae of Sunshine Junior Member
since 2001-07-15
Posts 35Valley of the Sun, Arizona |
Vic, this is gorgeous! And I can soooooo relate! Good work...keep it up, I love reading your stuff! mua! Tanya |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Thinking back to hearts entwined How quickly I could fall Can't help but wonder is it 'past' or 'future' I recall And I can't tell you how often I do this exact same thing...enjoyed this much! |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Just lovely... There's nothing like a good ole romantic piece to stir our hearts, is there... Nice one, Vicky..  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I like the give and take of this one, Vicky...it has a very quiet feel to it, where the mists are blending... it's a Keeper! |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Hopeful reminiscence? Nice treatment and presentation. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
I love this poem and the last lines give it such power. BRAVO!!!Magnificent writing. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Lovely poem Vicky. Sometimes the past lingers so dear in our memory that it feels like present, and leaves us wondering if it could be our future. I tried that once, but it did not work out for me. Deb |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ My sweet little buddy .... I just LOVE it when I'm RIGHT~  Wahooie ... this is sooooooooooo beautiful~ Tee-Hee~ One GREAT BIG HUG (right around your sweet little neck) for this gorgeous write~  ~*Me*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky, This is soooo romantic and very beautifully written! I can honestly say that this really has touched my heart and soul, the feelings felt so real to me! You are a beautiful person and a wonderful writer...I can't say enough about that! I'm so glad you are my friend and fellow poet! Love ya Cindi |
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Rindercella Member
since 1999-11-12
Posts 64La La Land |
A beautifully written piece. So enjoyable and believe me I did enjoy it. Hope that you know how this has touched others. *If the shoe fits ... the castle is yours* |
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