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The constant need to love
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The constant need to love |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Isolation petrify us so we search for love We are weak indeed We fall in love we cannot function without the other But that need can't never be fulfilled It's a void like a missing piece from an never ending puzzle The constant need to love |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how true it is. We all feel this constant need for love. Someone to share our heart, mind, body and soul with. You have put it perfectly in this poem. Very well done.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
and to be loved my friend. . . well done. . . these are wonderful thoughts. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It's a void like a missing piece from an never ending puzzle The constant need to love Never a truer verse written. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
For me it's a hunger...reminds me of a song, "constant craving"---you said it well, walker! |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
nicely done... regards, sudhir p.s. and I think it was k d lang who sang that song, that serenity refers to..... |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
Some writers are able to say much with little wording. You have accomplished just that. |
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