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Son Netier
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0 posted 2001-12-18 08:13 PM


Sing while you’re wrapping,
Pretty paper covers all,
Children are peeking.

Ribbons curling 'round
Santa soon he'll come to town
Clean the chimney quick

Snow drifts softly down
White on the green-brown grasses,
Wind whistles a tune

Cardinals sing too
Holly berries in green leaves
Red highlights delight

Our cheeks like the berries from the cold wind,
We join our friends and go out Caroling.

Bill

How’s this mix up poem dear Lady in White and others,
How's the Name for this?

Seasons Greetings!



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1 posted 2001-12-18 08:22 PM


(big huggsssssssss) Wow, this is so inventive, I love this! (smiles) Lady and White and Shou-Lao are going to love this, I am sure! May you carol the cheer of Christmas to all! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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2 posted 2001-12-18 08:27 PM


I'm not sure what you call it but I call it CRE8TIVE!!  Excellent!  Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

Son Netier
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3 posted 2001-12-18 08:30 PM


Noah,
Inventive yes and fun to do too, as for if it’s good poetry, I don’t know, but it’s the people like you that enjoys that make the writing worthwhile.

Enchantress/Nancy,
And fun too, whiting has been good for me special when other enjoys

Bill

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4 posted 2001-12-18 09:15 PM


A Seny-Hai-onet? You should trademark it. *s

Music, perfectly pitched,
Caresses the harshest curve.
--- Chanson deGest



Son Netier
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5 posted 2001-12-19 07:56 AM


Chansondegeste,
Not sure it would catch on, maybe if I write a few dozen more?

Bill

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6 posted 2001-12-19 08:43 AM



Write a few dozen, and then a few dozen more...they become small gems, and quite collectible, you know...

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