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Maybe A Seny-Hai-onet
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Maybe A Seny-Hai-onet |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Sing while you’re wrapping, Pretty paper covers all, Children are peeking. Ribbons curling 'round Santa soon he'll come to town Clean the chimney quick Snow drifts softly down White on the green-brown grasses, Wind whistles a tune Cardinals sing too Holly berries in green leaves Red highlights delight Our cheeks like the berries from the cold wind, We join our friends and go out Caroling. Bill How’s this mix up poem dear Lady in White and others, How's the Name for this? Seasons Greetings! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big huggsssssssss) Wow, this is so inventive, I love this! (smiles) Lady and White and Shou-Lao are going to love this, I am sure! May you carol the cheer of Christmas to all! (big hugggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Son, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I'm not sure what you call it but I call it CRE8TIVE!! Excellent! Hugs, Nancy.  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Noah, Inventive yes and fun to do too, as for if it’s good poetry, I don’t know, but it’s the people like you that enjoys that make the writing worthwhile. Enchantress/Nancy, And fun too, whiting has been good for me special when other enjoys Bill |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
A Seny-Hai-onet? You should trademark it. *s Music, perfectly pitched, |
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Son Netier Member
since 2001-12-11
Posts 116The Garden State |
Chansondegeste, Not sure it would catch on, maybe if I write a few dozen more? Bill |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Write a few dozen, and then a few dozen more...they become small gems, and quite collectible, you know...  |
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