You are there, here with me -Lady in White's challenge

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

0 posted 2001-12-15 07:36 AM

You are there… here with me
As you have been so many times before
When you are there it's clear to me
Though I give all, you offer more
So always there and near to me
Your spirit opens every door

You are there in time and space
Your spirit calls upon the ocean breeze
In the clouds I see your face
And hear your voice in rustling trees
You lift me up to take my place
And always bring me to my knees

You are there and here with me
A lover's tryst that's everywhere
Spirit's impart is dear to me
As you move through time and air
That you are there brings fear to me
For you cast off life's trammelled care

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2001-12-15 08:02 AM

Keth darling sister of my soul and caster of my dream, truly this is spectacular. When i grow up I want to write like you. (There's no chance of that happening though is there?)

Absolutely Wonderful

Love and warm stuff
As always
Slushy

To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-12-15 08:11 AM

Kethry,
You did well, enjoyed the read.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-12-15 08:12 AM

What Slushy Mushy said...and then some...Kethry, it's so good to see you back in the blue pages...Lady is going to be so happy to know that you picked up this challenge....

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

4 posted 2001-12-15 09:23 AM

A lovely write...

I quite enjoyed it......

Thank you
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N orth Carolina Girl
Senior Member

since 2001-12-04

Posts 962
NC,USA

5 posted 2001-12-15 09:27 AM

Kethry,your talent never ceases to amaze me.

Juanita

"always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to:

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

6 posted 2001-12-15 01:09 PM

BRAVO!!!!!A magnificent poem that fits the challenge to perfection. Very well done. I love it. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-12-15 01:25 PM

(smiles) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Kethry, the love of your heart glistens in your words! (sigh) May the spirit of love forever spread your hearts wings and carry you to eternal happiness! (sigh) Such a beautiful challenge, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kethry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

8 posted 2001-12-16 05:54 PM

Lovely write Keth, uplifting and airy!Write on.

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

9 posted 2001-12-16 06:29 PM

Absolutely Amazing! Keth.....
Thoroughly enjoyed.....

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

GenXer
Senior Member

since 2001-12-15

Posts 583
USA

10 posted 2001-12-18 11:18 PM

Keth - Beautiful writing. At first I thought it was a religious write, but the last stanza made me think it was about the love for another.

Dave

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

11 posted 2001-12-18 11:20 PM

great job my friend. . . wonderfully done. . . flowing from your pen as always. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

12 posted 2001-12-19 01:02 AM

Kethry - Kudos Kiddo! You sure enough met the challenge with one heck of a poem, I loved it!

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

13 posted 2001-12-19 08:42 AM

Kethry, you've slipped the bonds of earth and have flown high with this one, my congratulations to you for reaching and stretching and giving us such a Keeper...

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