Open Poetry #17 |
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That Little Thing You Do |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States ![]() |
That Little Thing You Do By Larry Chadwick I love to look deep into your eyes, And I love your gentle smile. I love the sparkle that I see, It makes it all worth while. But it is that added little touch, That really warms my heart. You may not even notice, It is such a little part. It is while our eyes are locked, And I sense the little grin, Is when it starts to happen, And then you do it once again. It seems to come so natural, That’s why I like it best. You put your hand between us, And you touch me on the chest. [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-18-2001).] [This message has been edited by Larry C (12-19-2001 12:24 AM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
It seems to come so natural, That’s why I like to best. You put your hand between us, And you touch me on the chest. Great write, Larry. Loved the way this brought me to the moment. You're right, it's those little things that make a love wondrous. |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Thanks Duncan. You caught my typo before it got fixed. LOL Your right about the little things! ![]() |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
That is really sweet and tender, Larry. I'm glad I didn't miss this one tonight. ![]() |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Unusual, huh? Glad your here. ![]() |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
must be a woman right? |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
It seems to come so natural, That’s why I like it best. You put your hand between us, And you touch me on the chest. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Ah Larry....You know, it's really nice to hear a man say what little things he likes about a woman. Not enough men open up and tell us just what it is that makes the moment special. Good write. Hugs, Nancy "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* it is the little things that make love eternal......I love the whole feel of this poem. Very well done, Larry. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
<IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/knuddel.gif"><IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/knuddel.gif"><IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/knuddel.gif"> (sigh) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, your loving heart always captures each lovely moment of pure romance through your touching verse! (smiles) May you forever cherish the simple joys of love eternally and happily! (big hugggssssss) Sooooooo beautiful! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Larry, thank you for sharing! <IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/xmas/wmann2.gif"><IMG SRC="http://www.plauder-smilies.de/xmas/wmann2.gif"> May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25![]()
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Larry, A sweet write ![]() Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Robert, Huh? ![]() Nancy Lee, Glad I could help! ![]() Karen, Thanks. I really appreciate that. ![]() Noah, Thanks. (You do know your smilies from that website you were using are no longer valid here, right?) ![]() Tara, That makes me happy. ![]() |
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RosePetal![]() ![]()
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
aww Larry, such a sweet, sincere write! ah life's little pleasures mean so much |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Larry - tender are your words in this write. It's a nice feeling when all you have said happens. These feelings I know, and from your writing, you know them also... BC |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
RosePetal, Thanks sweetie. ![]() Bill, Absolutely. Good feelings and good times. ![]() |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Larry,I love the way you write from the heart ![]() ![]() Juanita |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Juanita, Hey...thanks for that sweet compliment. ![]() |
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