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Take a piece of me ( post 1,000 )
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Take a piece of me ( post 1,000 ) |
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RosePetal 
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida 
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Take a piece of Me Take a piece of me To remember me by Take all of me with greed Leave my heart to cry I gave you a special piece of me Foolishly, you didn't know what to do My heart, abused by you selfishly Was never cherished all the way through Specialty comes in measures If you know how to love Mislead my trasure Handled it with black gloves Take a piece of me I'm a woman without feelings Is that what you believe? [This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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sodpossom Senior Member
since 2001-06-15
Posts 723N.C |
His foolishness allowed us to have this piece of you.Very nice write! Stevie |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Beautiful RP....and congrats. You are a pleasant and wonderful part of passions.. You express your feeling well....though this is somewhat sad...it is still well done... [This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 12-07-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* such incredible hurt and pain is written in these words. My heart goes out to you for he has no idea the value of the treasure he held in his hands. **big hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Rose Petal, Oh, I can see the bruises on your heart. So sorry you had cause for these words. I pray your tenderness and this pain will soon part. Jo Mason |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sad sigh) Oh Joanna, this is so so sad, my heart cries out to you! (big huggssssss) No one should ever be hurt this way, you deserve the greatest love and happiness your heart desires, sweet Joanna! (kiss on lips) I will always love you, and I'll always be here for you when you need someone to talk to! (wipes tears) My heart is with you, sweetheart! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is so nice! Congratulations! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Truly from the heart. WEll done and congratulations on the thousand mark Liz |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
 Well done Joanna! Congratulations on your 1000th post! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
tis an unfortunate thing that so many ignorant men have no idea how to treat a woman right.. congrats on your 1000th!!! Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
It was sad, RosePetal...but you made it into a beautiful poem.  Congratulations on your 1000 post. copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Well said. And congratulations on 1000th post. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Joanna, Congrats! And you did it with style. Who did he think he was anyway? Fool!  The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Such a sad poem Joanna. No one deserves to feel like this. Sad thoughts must always be expressed. This one was expressed very nicely. Good job on your 1,000 th post!!! Keep up the good work my friend From your friend Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Come on and take it...take another little piece of my heart now baby...only if you let him...find a good one and he will give as much as he takes...James |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
ahh..You are already on your 1,000th post? WOW!  This was heartfelt and sad, but well expressed. Its wonderful to have you here, and its wonderful to see you happy here.  (((HUGS)))Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful expression of your emotions! Congrats on your 1000th post! Rogue (aka Cubby) |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Great 1000th poem, congrats. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Joanna, YAY to you!   Congrats on your thousandth I hope to see many many more Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
I believe you have many deep feelings. Always expressed with tenderness. Those with shallow hearts can't treasure anything. But they can sure toss it aside. You deserve much more!!! Hugs! Sincerely, Regina It's all in the mind |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
He don't know what he missed in you, and that is ONE Beautiful Warmhearted Woman!! Congrats on 1000 my dear friend, you've marked it with a beautiful poem. (((warm hugs))) Charisma |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
RosePetal - congratulations on 1,000. A most telling writing, perhaps my feelings also... BC |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Congratulations on your 1000th post and good work here!! Michael Auguste~ |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Happy 1000. Now, can we look forward to another 1000 in the next six months? Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
1000th post with a bang! This was all too true about the way women get treated! I can feel the hurt behind the words but you'll get through it all, and you learn from the experience. Great poem! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
Well, now I don't know if I like you being treated like this! What a sad write  Carol Luna |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
RP...congratulations on your 1K mark.... Now, get going....2k is right ahead of you. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
Excellent writing Joanna. Congratulations on your 1000th post. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Don't let him have so much as a single crumb. BTW, congrats! |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Had to drop in and say Congrats, J! Looks like you've found yourself a nice home. *grins* You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb |
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