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RosePetal
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0 posted 2001-12-07 08:38 PM


Take a piece of Me

Take a piece of me
To remember me by
Take all of me with greed
Leave my heart to cry

I gave you a special piece of me
Foolishly, you didn't know what to do
My heart, abused by you selfishly
Was never cherished all the way through

Specialty comes in measures
If you know how to love
Mislead my trasure
Handled it with black gloves

Take a piece of me
I'm a woman without feelings
Is that what you believe?

[This message has been edited by RosePetal (edited 12-07-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Joanna - All Rights Reserved
sodpossom
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1 posted 2001-12-07 08:41 PM


His foolishness allowed us to have this piece of you.Very nice write!

Stevie

"In all things tried,you did the best you could do"

Magnus
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2 posted 2001-12-07 08:42 PM


Beautiful RP....and congrats.  You are a
pleasant and wonderful part of passions..

You express your feeling well....though this is
somewhat sad...it is still well done...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 12-07-2001).]

Startime
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3 posted 2001-12-07 08:49 PM


*sigh* such incredible hurt and pain is written in these words. My heart goes out to you for he has no idea the value of the treasure he held in his hands. **big hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

JoMason
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4 posted 2001-12-07 09:01 PM


Rose Petal,

Oh, I can see the bruises on your heart.
So sorry you had cause for these words.
I pray your tenderness and this pain will soon part.

Jo Mason

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5 posted 2001-12-07 09:09 PM






(sad sigh) Oh Joanna, this is so so sad, my heart cries out to you! (big huggssssss) No one should ever be hurt this way, you deserve the greatest love and happiness your heart desires, sweet Joanna! (kiss on lips) I will always love you, and I'll always be here for you when you need someone to talk to! (wipes tears) My heart is with you, sweetheart! (big hugggssssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joanna, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Irish Rose
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6 posted 2001-12-07 09:11 PM


This is so nice!  Congratulations!

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 2001-12-07 09:27 PM


Truly from the heart. WEll done and congratulations on the thousand mark
Liz

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8 posted 2001-12-07 09:32 PM


Well done Joanna!
Congratulations on your 1000th post!
   ~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

EagleScorpion
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9 posted 2001-12-07 10:28 PM


tis an unfortunate thing that so many ignorant men have no idea how to treat a woman right.. congrats on your 1000th!!!

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Madame Chipmunk
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10 posted 2001-12-07 10:35 PM


It was sad, RosePetal...but you made it into a beautiful poem.   Congratulations on your 1000 post.

copyright2001 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

mirror man
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11 posted 2001-12-08 12:27 PM


Well said.  And congratulations on 1000th post.  
Larry C
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12 posted 2001-12-08 12:37 PM


Joanna,
Congrats! And you did it with style. Who did he think he was anyway? Fool!  

The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present!

Hypnosis
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13 posted 2001-12-08 12:59 PM


Such a sad poem Joanna.  No one deserves to feel like this.  Sad thoughts must always be expressed.  This one was expressed very nicely.  Good job on your 1,000 th post!!!  Keep up the good work my friend

     From your friend
        Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

JamesMichael
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14 posted 2001-12-08 01:59 AM


Come on and take it...take another little piece of my heart now baby...only if you let him...find a good one and he will give as much as he takes...James
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15 posted 2001-12-08 03:03 AM


ahh..You are already on your 1,000th post? WOW!   This was heartfelt and sad, but well expressed. Its wonderful to have you here, and its wonderful to see you happy here.  

(((HUGS)))

Your storm of assumption feeds anger I am calm enough to hold inside. Don't pretend to know me if you've never put stretched out your heart with since

Rogue24
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16 posted 2001-12-08 03:44 PM


Beautiful expression of your emotions! Congrats on your 1000th post!

          Rogue (aka Cubby)

walker
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17 posted 2001-12-08 06:04 PM


Great 1000th poem, congrats.
rosepetals25
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18 posted 2001-12-08 06:14 PM


Joanna,
  
    YAY to you!     Congrats on your thousandth   I hope to see many many more


Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

rwood
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19 posted 2001-12-09 09:39 AM


I believe you have many deep feelings. Always expressed with tenderness. Those with shallow hearts can't treasure anything. But they can sure toss it aside. You deserve much more!!! Hugs!

Sincerely,
Regina

It's all in the mind
Except for what's in the heart.
http://www.mygem.net/heartquill

Charisma
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20 posted 2001-12-09 10:28 AM


He don't know what he missed in you, and that is ONE Beautiful Warmhearted Woman!!

Congrats on 1000 my dear friend, you've marked it with a beautiful poem.

(((warm hugs)))
Charisma

Bill Charles
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21 posted 2001-12-09 06:22 PM


RosePetal - congratulations on 1,000. A most telling writing, perhaps my feelings also...

BC

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22 posted 2001-12-10 02:40 PM


Congratulations on your 1000th post and good work here!!  

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

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23 posted 2001-12-10 03:06 PM


Happy 1000.  
Now, can we look forward to another 1000 in the next six months?

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Domzi
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24 posted 2001-12-10 06:32 PM


1000th post with a bang!
This was all too true about the way
women get treated!
I can feel the hurt behind the words
but you'll get through it all, and
you learn from the experience.
Great poem!

Poetry is spiritual ventilation!

Carol Luna
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25 posted 2001-12-10 06:38 PM



Well, now I don't know if I like you being treated like this!  What a sad write  

Carol Luna
~give me peace, no matter what the cost~

Magnus
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26 posted 2001-12-10 10:00 PM


RP...congratulations on your 1K mark....
Now,  get going....2k is right ahead of you.

Eloise
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27 posted 2001-12-11 01:46 AM


Excellent writing Joanna.  Congratulations on your 1000th post.  
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28 posted 2001-12-11 02:05 AM


Don't let him have so much as a single crumb.
BTW, congrats!

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29 posted 2001-12-11 02:51 AM


Had to drop in and say Congrats, J!  Looks like you've found yourself a nice home. *grins*  

You can't wake a person who is pretending to be asleep. -- Navajo Proverb

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