Open Poetry #17 |
A Duet of Night |
Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Finding you in words Showing your heart, love follows Leaves one in wonder I requested God May I ascend to his dreams God winked Yes at me In words we are led Two come to join as one write A duet of night [This message has been edited by Decaflame (12-18-2001 12:33 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
In words we are led Two come to join as one write A duet of night I really like the way you use words to fit your meaning...very cool! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I requested God May I ascend to his dreams God winked Yes at me ======================== Decca-girlie where have you been *S* dont stay quiet so long...ya make me wonder what your doing and how much fun your having with out me ROFL You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are always sooooooo romantic in your declarations of love! (smiles) May you forever embrace in a duet of eternal love in His loving request! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo heavenly! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is beautiful! Such a cool message with so few words. Thank you for sharing. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fantastic! 1derful! Masterful! Oh, and I like it, too Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Decaflame - first one I have read of yours, I liked it very much... BC |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, effective write. Sandra |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderfully done... regards, sudhir P.S. just wondering if 'smiled' would be more effective instead of 'winked' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful! I love it!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Beautiful, Deca - I'm glad you're here. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ditto JM, glad to see you back and girl you definitely have "word power"! ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, I really like this one. The vision of it is so romantic. Very well done. I can't wait to see more. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bump |
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