Open Poetry #17 |
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A Duet of Night |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Finding you in words Showing your heart, love follows Leaves one in wonder I requested God May I ascend to his dreams God winked Yes at me In words we are led Two come to join as one write A duet of night [This message has been edited by Decaflame (12-18-2001 12:33 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
In words we are led Two come to join as one write A duet of night I really like the way you use words to fit your meaning...very cool! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I requested God May I ascend to his dreams God winked Yes at me ======================== Decca-girlie where have you been *S* dont stay quiet so long...ya make me wonder what your doing and how much fun your having with out me ROFL ![]() You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Mistletoe Angel![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are always sooooooo romantic in your declarations of love! (smiles) May you forever embrace in a duet of eternal love in His loving request! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo heavenly! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun![]()
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
This is beautiful! Such a cool message with so few words. Thank you for sharing. ![]() |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Fantastic! 1derful! Masterful! Oh, and I like it, too ![]() Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Decaflame - first one I have read of yours, I liked it very much... BC |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very nice, effective write. Sandra |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderfully done... regards, sudhir P.S. just wondering if 'smiled' would be more effective instead of 'winked' |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful! I love it!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Beautiful, Deca - I'm glad you're here. |
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Mysteria![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Ditto JM, glad to see you back and girl you definitely have "word power"! ![]() ~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Oh yes, I really like this one. The vision of it is so romantic. Very well done. I can't wait to see more. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper![]() ![]()
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Bump ![]() |
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