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Decaflame
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0 posted 2001-12-18 12:22 PM



Finding you in words
Showing your heart, love follows
Leaves one in wonder

I requested God
May I ascend to his dreams
God winked Yes at me

In words we are led
Two come to join as one write
A duet of night

[This message has been edited by Decaflame (12-18-2001 12:33 PM).]

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Duncan
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1 posted 2001-12-18 12:37 PM


In words we are led
Two come to join as one write
A duet of night

I really like the way you use words to fit your meaning...very cool!

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-12-18 01:27 PM


I requested God
May I ascend to his dreams
God winked Yes at me
========================

Decca-girlie where have you been *S*
dont stay quiet so long...ya make me wonder what your doing and how much fun your having with out me ROFL

You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do.
Thats the way love is ... sky blue and black.


Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2001-12-18 01:34 PM


(sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, you are always sooooooo romantic in your declarations of love! (smiles) May you forever embrace in a duet of eternal love in His loving request! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo heavenly! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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Gaia
4 posted 2001-12-18 02:14 PM


This is beautiful! Such a cool message with so few words. Thank you for sharing.
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Deep in the heart
5 posted 2001-12-18 06:27 PM


Fantastic!  1derful!  Masterful!

Oh, and I like it, too

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Bill Charles
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6 posted 2001-12-19 01:04 AM


Decaflame - first one I have read of yours, I liked it very much...

BC

catalinamoon
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7 posted 2001-12-19 08:34 AM


Very nice, effective write.
Sandra

Sudhir Iyer
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8 posted 2001-12-19 08:39 AM


wonderfully done...

regards,
sudhir
P.S. just wondering if 'smiled' would be more effective instead of 'winked'

Enchantress
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9 posted 2001-12-19 09:11 AM


This is beautiful!  I love it!! ~Hugs, Nancy~

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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10 posted 2001-12-19 10:34 AM


enjoyed
LngJhnAg
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11 posted 2001-12-19 10:12 PM


Beautiful, Deca - I'm glad you're here.
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12 posted 2001-12-20 12:05 PM


Ditto JM, glad to see you back and girl you definitely have "word power"!

~*~ The Very Best Of The Season To You And Yours ~*~

Startime
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13 posted 2001-12-20 12:08 PM


Oh yes, I really like this one. The vision of it is so romantic. Very well done. I can't wait to see more. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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Deep in the heart
14 posted 2001-12-21 11:12 AM


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