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Trying To Survive
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Trying To Survive |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Trying To Survive Sometimes it feels as though the sun is lost Seeking shelter behind the dismal clouds Things seem so cold, outlined with heavy frost The wind pounding against my weakened soul Hope I try to hold close becomes smaller Life's cruel sense of humor kicking me down I straighten my back… try to stand taller Even strongest wills can endure so much Sometimes it just feels like I’m in a hole Struggling… fighting to find my way out Try to survive and save this tattered soul Not to crumble and accept this sad loss My heart lies heavy inside of my chest I know I have love, and I am grateful But with this long winding path and life’s jest I feel lost… buried… and so alone. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (12-18-2001 01:51 PM).] |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Hope I try to hold close becomes smaller Life cruel sense of humor kicking me down I straighten my back… try to stand taller Even strongest wills can endure so much Powerful write...related much. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggsssssss) Oh Tara, I know you are going through a difficult time right now, and my heart goes out to you always! (sigh) You have a very loving heart, sweet friend, and as long as you continue to share your love to all and believe in yourself, you will be greeted with love and cheer in return! (smiles) We all love you so much, sweet friend, you are an angel to us all! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
rosepetals,this is so very sad and emotional  Wonderful writing with so much feeling   Juanita "always have a smile on your face it makes people wonder what you`re up to: [This message has been edited by N orth Carolina Girl (12-18-2001 01:17 PM).] |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Duncan - I'm guessing, unfortunately, everyone can relate to these feelings. Thank you for stopping in. Noah - Thank you. Your sweet words always make me smile.  Juanita - Thank you for stopping in. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Tara HUGS  I am lost, we havent spoken for a few days, only to say hi and bye, I didnt know you were upset over something.  I expect you to spill everything and let me be here for you as you are always for me!  Hugs sweetheart, Love you my friend! Ter. Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Terry - It happens every holiday season. I'll be ok in a few months. I know that sounds bad...... but .. I will be ok. Love you too "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
rosepetals25 - a sad write, but hang in there, it will change... Merry Christmas to you.... BC |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm always amazed how hard this time of year can be for a lot of people. . . I think that you just spoke for a lot of them. . . well done. . . and remember, it's never dark in the light. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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