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No Non-sense |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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No Non-sense did you ever taste the sadness of my lips or hold the loneliness of my finger tips smell the real fear that I exposed in your rush by me you didn’t I suppose couldn’t you see it the pain on my face and with so little could have been erased so now all you are allowed in a voice so clear is just the echo of me the only sound you hear "I have already paid for all my future sins." Sade...(King of Sorrow) |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Slick, Good for you Enjoyed |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sad sigh) Oh Helen, I'm so sorry that this person could never feel for you and help wash your tears and pain away, I couldn't help but cry reading this to feel your cry for compassion behind your words! (sigh) Know you are loved by many now, and we are always here for you when you need someone to talk to! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
enjoyed the read |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
this is so very good It paints a picture Nice and clear yes it is very good Thanks arthur |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
1slick_lady - your writings I read, and I am touched by your sincerity... BC |
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