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Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

0 posted 2001-12-18 06:29 AM

medieval thoughts
of an escape into open skies
like much advertised commercials
of a flight out of obscurity
coming out of a black hole,
like an era,
as golden as it may seem

a moment in time waiting
some capture of happening

it is all a matter of chance
like results of years of penance
being ever honest, helpful,
kind, devoted, caring, loving...

isn't that what human nature is for?

but, if there's no
reciprocation
of heart-felt feelings,
will it lead to a society
that lacks procreation
of humanity?

after all, kindness does come
in strange currencies
like little drops amongst
wide expansive seas

words don't come out easy
particularly the ones that say
'Sorry, please forgive me' or
'I promise you true love all my life'

no, the right words are never said right
but then, some words are best heard
in silence
just like some birds never fly
together in love,
and to some forever sounds like an
ugly word --
of promises never kept

it's time for renaissance
it's that just time of the year
to spend some hours of essence
with all those near and those dear

and once that is done
please try to pardon
me too

it's time for renewal
and to grant forgiveness

extend a few donations
of that silver spoon to
me too

---

it is a collection of some words that kept pouring ... thanks for coming by...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-12-18 08:09 AM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sudhir, this is sucha beautiful meaningful message that we should all relate to together. (sigh) This holiday season, let us keep our promises and stay close to all our loved ones and keep them comfort and love always. (sigh) May we all find love and forgiveness together in each other and bring a new year of hope to us all! (big hugggssssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is such a beautiful prayer! God Bless You, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sudhir, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 2001-12-18 08:14 AM

Sudhir,
The message is loud and clear, enjoyed.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-12-18 09:19 AM

Let them pour freely, I love your free verse, Sudhir, it is an honor to read your thoughts.

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

4 posted 2001-12-18 09:37 AM

wonderful writing

say a prayer for me, too, please.... thank you!

RosePetal

Member Elite

since 2001-08-26

Posts 2985
South Florida

5 posted 2001-12-18 12:50 PM

your so right sudhir! sometimes the words dont come out right! Other times the best things are said in silence. I love reading your thoughts because my thoughts are very similar to yours sir!

RP

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

6 posted 2001-12-19 03:32 AM

Thank you so very much, my dear friends... your reading and responding is much appreciated...

Regards to you,
Sudhir

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