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Shadowed_Innersense
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since 2001-12-05
Posts 49
somewhere at the edge

0 posted 2001-12-18 01:10 AM


Take me
to
and not beyond

Teetering
life
for which I'm fond

Justify
why?
Because we feel

Lonliness
...you...
the Edge is real

The view
here
I see it all

Captivating
hear?
the endless call?

Choices
for
I must soon make

The Edge
is
where I you take


For those unsure, Shadowed Innersense is the
alter ego of ctowen .... not used as a diversion
but as a tool to create, stimulate, and search parts of the mind.

[This message has been edited by Shadowed_Innersense (edited 12-18-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Shadowed Innersense - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2001-12-18 02:50 AM


I like this searching within, and the shadows you reveal.

"Take me
to
and not beyond"


Shadowed_Innersense
Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49
somewhere at the edge
2 posted 2001-12-18 08:07 AM


In a sense ... it helps to define my shadows.
"Why? Because we live"

Thank you for your response Kacy .... we learn things about ourselves everyday. *s

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262
A State of Disarray
3 posted 2001-12-18 03:03 PM


Cool write!!  
Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
4 posted 2001-12-18 03:07 PM


BRAVO!!! You always express deep thoughts of the mind so very well, I love it! (smiles) May we all justify our pathes together and go the distance to all our dreams and ambitions! (big hugggssssss) So wonderful, dear friend, I love your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale
5 posted 2001-12-18 05:34 PM


I like this side of you...very well done.
I lean towards the shadows sometimes myself.

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
6 posted 2001-12-18 05:57 PM


So very intense and chilling were your words.  Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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