Open Poetry #17 |
The Edge |
Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
Take me to and not beyond Teetering life for which I'm fond Justify why? Because we feel Lonliness ...you... the Edge is real The view here I see it all Captivating hear? the endless call? Choices for I must soon make The Edge is where I you take For those unsure, Shadowed Innersense is the alter ego of ctowen .... not used as a diversion but as a tool to create, stimulate, and search parts of the mind. [This message has been edited by Shadowed_Innersense (edited 12-18-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like this searching within, and the shadows you reveal. "Take me to and not beyond" |
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Shadowed_Innersense Junior Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 49somewhere at the edge |
In a sense ... it helps to define my shadows. "Why? Because we live" Thank you for your response Kacy .... we learn things about ourselves everyday. *s |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Cool write!! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! You always express deep thoughts of the mind so very well, I love it! (smiles) May we all justify our pathes together and go the distance to all our dreams and ambitions! (big hugggssssss) So wonderful, dear friend, I love your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I like this side of you...very well done. I lean towards the shadows sometimes myself. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
So very intense and chilling were your words. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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