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One MomentPoetdeVines challange
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One MomentPoetdeVines challange |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida 
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One Moment ~*~ One moment of serenity is all I desire to feel a golden smile to be set free from trials and rid the madness that surrounds my December heart I lie down in hard places and wish for soft meadows of green for one moment I close my eyes and find a measure of peace to treasure For it was not into my ear you whispered But into my heart It was not my lips you kissed But my soul For just one moment my soul was free and it felt good ~*~ BloomingRose |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I could feel the beauty of this one moment. This poem is wonderful. I will have to take a look at the challenge. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
What a beautiful and romantic write. peaches |
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Opeth Senior Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 1543The Ravines |
From one Floridian to another (although I am a replant), let me say that this was one excellent piece of writing. I could feel your words as they made me completely understand "where you were coming from." |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
BloomingRose, I like this.. memories of a time that stopped the world... such good memories.. although painful at times. Well done. Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Deb- This is gorgeous, my friend.  You've met this challenge wonderfully. Hugs,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Soooooooo lovely, sweet friend! May your soul forever sing with true loves joy and happiness! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, you are sooooooo romantic! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Debra, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
This is a beautiful gem! Challenge perfectly met!! |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Star~ looking forward to reading your poem. Thanks. Peaches~ Thank you so much Opeth~ Glad you like. I am from Jax. Fl also. Small world. Tara~ Yes you are 100% there. Thanks for reading. Vicky~ Thank you. I am glad you enjoyed. Hugs back to ya. Noah~ You light up my life with all those trees. Thank you Rosepetal~ Thank you *hugs* |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply beautiful. I'm thrilled that so much good poetry is coming from that one phrase!! Thank you so much!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
This is beautifully written Deb..i loved it...hugss... ~Victoria~ |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Poet DeVine challenged us??? Oh boy I've to do some digging here LOL Beautiful poem you've written BloomingRose Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Poet~ I'm so glad you posted the challenge. Thanks you. Victoria~ Thank you *hugs* back to you! Titia~ Yes, do check out the challenge. It's a wonderful Judy Garland quote. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi BloomingRose i can honestly say that i don't take to love poetry..but i really liked this..read it twice, in fact may i say who is Judy Garland though? |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
WHERE????Can't find it Please give me the url Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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