Open Poetry #17 |
The Glass of Air that Separates |
Martie
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Posts 28049California |
The Glass of Air that Separates In the room I roam with ear pressed against the glass of air that separated my table from theirs. Lost to my companion, consumed by a conversation from behind, words with no faces. A toast to beginnings and endings, what do you say? I heard. Out with the old, in with the new. To beginnings and endings, and to truth, no matter what. I looked up to the cleared eyed watch of my companion, who understood the nature of my listening A toast, I thought, a brown table, a glass, the napkin with a wet circle. How many things are permanent? The circle, a symbol of continuity and continuation, yet, this circle will be gone soon, dried up and thrown away, carted off and dumped into a landfill and forever changed. Are we in life, like the napkin, imprinted, used and thrown away? He touched the circle on my finger, the symbol of our love, he touched it with his own. Uncertain of direction I listened still. I toast to truth and just straight lines, I heard. I looked down at our hands now interlocked warm on warm and raised my glass. To circles, I said. _____ From l999 |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet Martie! (smiles) May you forever share the circle of life with your love and dance in happiness! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, I love your words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie oh Martie....beautiful as always. You always manage to leave me breathless. Hugs, Nancy "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~I'm holding my heart, as I so often do during and after reading you, your words fascinate me you know. *Peace and prayer Martie. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Martie this is stunningly superb I know you are a mistress of your art but this is outstandingly good. Normally your writing is wonderful this is even better than normal. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Perfect. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
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He touched the circle on my finger, the symbol of our love, he touched it with his own. Uncertain of direction I listened still. I toast to truth and just straight lines, I heard. I looked down at our hands now interlocked warm on warm and raised my glass. To circles, I said. ================================= You just keep on circling my friend...for thats where quiet comfort is found. "A toast" ...to the ties that bind ... to the parts of one another that rest so easy on each others mind. To the laughter and the tears ... for its those things that keep us circling through the years. To the me--in you--the you in me ... to all things meant to be. *clink* *wink* You're the hidden cost and the thing that's lost in everything I do. |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
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see, I can't put words together like this, have you been doing this long? |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, A wonderful write. *L* |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
To Circles indeed!!!!!! Regards, sudhir |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!The unbroken circle of love that holds hope no matter the rough times for that golden circle is the perfect symbol of true love. BRAVO!!! I love it. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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Long live the circles! Very nice, Martie! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing Martie...James |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Dang, but you do write well, Martie. Have I told you that before? I knew when I read the title that this was going to be good. Not the least disappointed. e |
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