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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-17 07:00 PM


In a world torn by so much strife,
where many children suffer each day.
We must be thankful for what is in our life,
and to our God we must faithfully pray.

There are children crying over there
in a distant land we cannot see.
There are children dying over there.
Dear God....Why must it be?

I pray for them, those little ones
whose lives and bodies have been torn apart.
I cry for them, those precious ones...
Their suffering truly breaks my heart.

The leaders justify it as ethnic cleansing
and that is not murder they say.
They boast about it in their meetings
while the dead lie outside still and gray.

The children are the little victims
whose fragile lives are forever changed.
Hidden behind those precious faces...
The horrid thoughts remain for years deranged.

Their lonely mothers cry out and weep
quietly for many hours of the night.
The children fitfully trying to sleep
while outside they continue to fight.

My life has never experienced, felt or seen
the awful suffering that they say
goes on in the foreign land no longer serene
and sadly so terribly far away.

Someday they will no longer be
the children of that war torn land.
For God will take them mercifully
to Heaven within his mighty hand.

And when the children are no longer here
but there with him for eternity’s stay.
Remember they once were of the land
now not so terribly distant and far away

I wrote this during the Bosnia Tragedy...

[This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 12-17-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-17 07:04 PM


It's difficult to explain why there is so much pain in the world. But we can pray for God to heal the world. Great poem.
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2 posted 2001-12-17 07:10 PM


*sigh* you write from deep within feelings of such heartfelt sorrow that in the reading tears fall freely from my eyes. You bring vividly to life what goes on in this world of ours. Absolutely stunning writing, Magnus. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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3 posted 2001-12-17 08:12 PM


A heartfelt and very honest write Barry.
How very very sad when I think about the children.
Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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4 posted 2001-12-17 08:18 PM


Aw, such a sad poem, but it speaks the complete truth.  No one deserves to live like this, well except for the devilish humans conducting these horrible "ceansings" as you may say.  This must be stopped immediately.  Great write Magnus!

     Randy Meador

a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living.

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5 posted 2001-12-17 09:02 PM


Someday they will no longer be
the children of that war torn land.
For God will take them mercifully
to Heaven within his mighty hand
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
A big *AMEN* to this.
Well written poem about the suffering of today, but praise God it won't always be so.

Deb

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6 posted 2001-12-17 09:07 PM


Very meaningful poem Magnus! We should always be thankful for our blessings, even more so on holidays when the family comes together in celebration! (hugs)
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7 posted 2001-12-17 10:04 PM



(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Magnus, this is so very sad! My heart cries out to all these poor children and families, and I pray that they all will find love and a smile these holidays! (sad sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, your sensitive caring heart shines in this touching piece! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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8 posted 2001-12-17 10:06 PM


this is a painful read....
Robert A
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9 posted 2001-12-18 10:15 AM


you speak the words..I have seen all of this.
people gripe and complain, yes, this is fine, we should be thankful!


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