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A Duet with a Muse - and a challenge
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A Duet with a Muse - and a challenge |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A Duet with a Muse You are there, here with Me Centering my soul's destiny Traced along curved lines so fair, What you saw is my heart bared. You are there, here with Me I am your thought's desire You remain my spark of fire Kismet was our chance of meet Fate now touches our heartbeat You are there, here with Me In my Where find Why of me As I look to you for certainty For you are caught in my inquire And I am yours in fond desire. You are there, here with Me In this our web of design Caught up in our own consign I am now your fancy, freed, You are there, here with Me ~*~ Now, Passionate Poets, the challenge is the phrase, "You are there, here with Me". Have at it! |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
In a confused state, blinded by the White Lady in his eyes, poor ol' Long John misreads the challenge and quickly pens.... You are there, far from me, Where I'm safe from all you see As now my heart rejoices at The kicking of a kitty cat! Oh oh - I hope Marsha doesn't read this response, as I she will tell that lil Sunshine and Pandora about my backsliding ways.... |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
You are there, here with me, A peaceful song of serenity That gives me hope and gives me peace That things are as they're meant to be. Beautiful poem Lady...fub food for thought. Our muse is our best friend sometimes... thank you. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
After reading this wonderful poem...I just couldn't resist trying my hand at one. Thank you for the inspiration. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-12-2001).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lady I can try, maybe Okay this is wonderful but 'tis a difficult challenge. YOU might well be able to do this but i don't know darling girl whether I can do it. As for you Long John,  Oh how could you? And after you promised the kitties a day free from you kicking them all. How can you be so cruel on this special day.I do no more than say I'll think about it, as always Puck   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
oh I do find inspire in your words  thank you for the challenge!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh, now this I've got to do. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
a *bump* so Magnus can find this |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You are there, here with Me Centering my soul's destiny Traced along curved lines so fair, What you saw is my heart bared. You are there, here with Me I am your thought's desire You remain my spark of fire Kismet was our chance of meet Fate now touches our heartbeat ========================================= Well you already know I love this one... this is a lovely pairing of words and anticipation of things to come, promised. As for that challenge...that my dear lady requires a muse and mine ONCE AGAIN seems to be on holiday.  She better bring me back some chocolate covered cherries  |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
ok, this I will have to try if my muse will just come visit for a short while. I liked this one Lady. On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'll give it a shot, Lady...  |
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Rogue24 Member
since 2001-12-01
Posts 111Ontario, Canada |
Very inspiring, (grabs a pen) Looks like a challenge many are eager to accept! Hugs. Ter Alone in the dark, through my thoughts comfort I do seek, through my words I find peace. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
wonderful poetry in its lovely flow... Regards to you, sudhir P.S. I will try to write one... P.P.S. did that... hope you like it... thanks for the wonderful phrase: /pip/Forum52/HTML/002038.html [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (edited 12-13-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Another inspirational challenge. Hmm, perhaps I'll ask my muse to participate, if she isn't already halfway there, or is it here, with you? |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
First I must thank you all for reading this little piece, and now...off to find all of the responses... |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You can find my response on Page 7, sweet friend! (kiss on cheek) This was such a wonderful challenge, sweet friend, I love it so very much! Everyone...give yourself a random applause, we all deserve it!!! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
This is a real beauty who reached my heart I sure will try one, you just wait Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
This is a wonderful poem and challenge. I love to read your poetry. P.S. Even though, I don't write as good as all of you I just might try to do this challenge, too |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Smart Chick, until you try, you won't know. Thank you again to everyone who is making this little challenge such a success! Write on! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
This is incedibly beautiful. I don't think I can meet this challenge, but hey, maybe I will try anyway. This sounds like a song, perfectly flowing and lyrical. Sandra |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Dear Lady, I've taken on my first challenge. And it is all your fault! And I just want to thank you for your poem and your challenge. You made me reach...does that make you a muse?  And here is my link:You are there, Here with me...Lady's Challenge |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Lady In White, Love the line .......You are there, here with me. That alone says so much! JoMason 12/15/01 |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
(just for fun)... You are there, here with me ~ You, fine wine, and me, the brie. Stale crackers along our way, Have tried to keep us two away. You are there, here with me ~ In my heart you'll always be, Just as yang needs a ying It is your words I always sing. You are there, here with me ~ Inside your heart I always see, Compassion, grace, a lady fair, Lady in White, I took your dare! ~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
No matter where..they can still be there..inside, dwelling vividly. A wonderful inspire. The holidays have me so far behind. I just wanted to stop and say this is gorgeous. Peace and Poetry wonderful Lady. Sincerely, Regina |
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Robert A Member
since 2001-10-29
Posts 174 |
this is nice, interesting phrase "there with me, here with me" |
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