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Lisann
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since 2001-01-31
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0 posted 2001-12-17 11:37 AM



If I were ice......
I'd freeze your soul
As you did mine.

If I were a knife.....
I'd slash away all the pain
You made me go through.

If I were water.....
I'd drown the memories
You've etched in my mind.

If I were a lightning bolt......
I'd strike you to the ground
As you did me.

If I were rain.......
I'd wash away your evilness
That you cursed me with.

If I were sadness.....
I'd make you cry
Like you did to me.

If I were magic....
I'd make you disappear
Like you did  to my innocence.

If I were fire.....
I'd burn you
And melt away the image
I remember so often.

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1 posted 2001-12-17 11:44 AM


Lisann, I am glad you are getting this out....so much there that needs to be erased...I wish with all my heart I could do that for you.  
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
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2 posted 2001-12-17 12:06 PM


*sigh* my heart breaks for your pain, dear one. To write it out is very healing...I pray that you can wash away all the hurt that has been done to you. **big hugs**


Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

[This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-17-2001).]

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Canada eh.
3 posted 2001-12-17 12:10 PM


Lisann you write with so much pain...but, keep on writing...it does help!
Hugs, Nancy.

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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4 posted 2001-12-17 05:16 PM




(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Lisann, my heart cries out to you, this is so very sad! (big hugggsssssss) Healing takes time, and I pray with all my heart you can erase these memories and replace them with happy cheerful promises of true love and happiness! (sigh) I wish I could do this all for you, but my heart is always with you and I pray the ebst joy for you! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, God Bless You! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lisann, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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