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Dream Lovers (Duet with Startime)
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Dream Lovers (Duet with Startime) |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Please take my hand and walk with me down crystal corridors of time Let our hearts and souls be set free as we explore love’s words in rhyme. I can hold your hand, take a stand From the mountains to ocean blue As both go our way in this land Singing songs of love felt by two Please whisper softly in my ear tender words that cause a shiver. See sparkles in my eye, a tear from one who makes my heart quiver. The breezes will flow through your hair as words of love caress your heart. I will guard you dear, lady fair from moments before time did start. Please kiss me tenderly dear man letting me melt into your arms. Set passion’s flame our secret plan as I submit to all your charms. The softest kiss that my lips hold will drink of your wine with my own. For this heart truly does feel bold even when these charms are not shown. Please let me stay in your embrace and not awake from this deep sleep. A dream lover who fills this place kissing away tears that I weep. I will dry your eyes with soft sighs while you're lying there smiling so. Then the dream lover quietly lies For his heart says not ever go. [This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
May I please raise a glass of champagne to both of you? This deserves nothing less. Sandra |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra...thanx much...Startime led the way and I just followed her lead... I would be pleased to do this with you as well if you so desired.. You pick the topic...give me four stanzas...email them to my email addy..it is listed..and we will get it done...NO rush...take your time if you want to have a little light fun. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
You both deserve a standing ovation   Peaches |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
YES ... most excellent!! I could see Karen took the lead but I must say you followed nicely.   |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful!! You two sing well together!! "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
You two work very well together  This is beautiful! Very well done my friends. Hopefully you to share you talents more often Hugs to you both, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*grin* thank you...everyone...it was fun to write this with Barry. He is a master at this kind of writing. Now I am waiting very impatiently to see the masterpieces that will pour forth when everyone else writes with him. **hugs** Now please get to work at them.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
When do we get another duet from you two? Soon, I hope Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is wonderful, oh jeez, I have stanzas to work on!!!! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime and Magnus - a most romantic duet you both have written. This is very well done, and I hope that there are more on the way... BC |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Peaches...it was a delight doing this... I look forward to doing the others with the rest of the poets... I suspect that Startime will be avail for another.. We both appreciate your comments. Thanx.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Craig...she is very talented...easy to write behind what she posts...with 8/8 count...was very easy to make the rhyme and flow work... We both thank you... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Nancy...thank yu...and hurry and get well so that you and I can do ours...I am looking forward to your magic... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx RP25...it was a blast...And if you ever want to try...I would be honored.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
interloper...maybe after the other poets and I try to finish this first one...It was a lot of fun...easy to work with Startime. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay...thanx and YES...you have stanzas to work on...I am waiting... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
BC...thank you from both of us...we feel honored by your words...I think the other duets will turn out nicely too.. |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
I always enjoy both of your writings so this collaboration is doubling my pleasure! Very very incredible write! RP |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thank you RP...Startime and I both had fun with this...Glad you enjoyed it.. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 CLAPPING WILDLY!!! BRAVO!!! YOU TWO MAKE A FABULOUS COLLABORATION WITH WORDS!!! (big hugggsssssss) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friends, I LOVE IT!!! You have such beautiful hearts, dearest Karen and Barry, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Noah....now get yours turned in and we will post another one.... |
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