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Magnus
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0 posted 2001-12-16 10:27 PM


Please take my hand and walk with me
down crystal corridors of time
Let our hearts and souls be set free
as we explore love’s words in rhyme.

I can hold your hand, take a stand
From the mountains to ocean blue
As both go our way in this land
Singing songs of love felt by two

Please whisper softly in my ear
tender words that cause a shiver.
See sparkles in my eye, a tear
from one who makes my heart quiver.

The breezes will flow through your hair
as  words of love caress your heart.
I will guard you  dear, lady fair
from moments before time did start.

Please kiss me tenderly dear man
letting me melt into your arms.
Set passion’s flame our secret plan
as I submit to all your charms.

The softest kiss that my lips hold
will drink of  your wine with my own.
For this heart  truly does feel bold
even when these charms are not shown.

Please let me stay in your embrace
and not awake from this deep sleep.
A dream lover who fills this place
kissing away tears that I weep.

I will dry your eyes with soft sighs
while  you're lying there  smiling so.
Then the dream lover quietly lies
For his heart says not ever go.

[This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 12-17-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 Barry J. Tackett - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-12-16 10:29 PM


May I please raise a glass of champagne to   both of you? This deserves nothing less.
Sandra

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2 posted 2001-12-16 10:35 PM


Sandra...thanx much...Startime led the way
and I just followed her lead...

I would be pleased to do this with you as
well if you so desired..  You pick the
topic...give me four stanzas...email them
to my email addy..it is listed..and we
will get it done...NO rush...take your time
if you want to have a little light fun.


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3 posted 2001-12-16 11:00 PM


You both deserve a standing ovation
Peaches

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4 posted 2001-12-16 11:07 PM


YES ... most excellent!!
I could see Karen took the lead
but I must say you followed nicely.
       



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5 posted 2001-12-16 11:12 PM


Wonderful!!  You two sing well together!!

"A dream is a wish your heart makes..."

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6 posted 2001-12-16 11:16 PM


You two work very well together   This is beautiful! Very well done my friends. Hopefully you to share you talents more often  

Hugs to you both,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

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7 posted 2001-12-17 12:33 PM


*grin* thank you...everyone...it was fun to write this with Barry. He is a master at this kind of writing. Now I am waiting very impatiently to see the masterpieces that will pour forth when everyone else writes with him. **hugs** Now please get to work at them.  

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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8 posted 2001-12-17 01:15 PM


When do we get another duet from you two?
Soon, I hope

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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9 posted 2001-12-17 01:17 PM


This is wonderful, oh jeez, I have stanzas to work on!!!!

Kathleen (Kay)
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Laurie Lee

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10 posted 2001-12-17 02:27 PM


Startime and Magnus - a most romantic duet you both have written. This is very well done, and I hope that there are more on the way...

BC

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11 posted 2001-12-17 02:51 PM


Peaches...it was a delight doing this...
I look forward to doing the others with
the rest of the poets...

I suspect that Startime will be avail for
another..  We both appreciate your comments.

Thanx..

Magnus
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12 posted 2001-12-17 02:52 PM


Craig...she is very talented...easy to
write behind what she posts...with 8/8
count...was very easy to make the rhyme
and flow work...

We both thank you...

Magnus
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13 posted 2001-12-17 02:53 PM


Nancy...thank yu...and hurry and get well
so that you and I can do ours...I am looking
forward to your magic...

Magnus
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14 posted 2001-12-17 02:54 PM


Thanx RP25...it was a blast...And if you
ever want to try...I would be honored..

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15 posted 2001-12-17 02:55 PM


interloper...maybe after the other poets
and I try to finish this first one...It was
a lot of fun...easy to work with Startime.

Magnus
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16 posted 2001-12-17 02:56 PM


Kay...thanx and YES...you have stanzas to
work on...I am waiting...

Magnus
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17 posted 2001-12-17 02:57 PM


BC...thank you from both of us...we feel
honored by your words...I think the other
duets will turn out nicely too..

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18 posted 2001-12-17 03:40 PM


I always enjoy both of your writings so this collaboration is doubling my pleasure!
Very very incredible write!

RP

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19 posted 2001-12-17 04:19 PM


Thank you RP...Startime and I both had
fun with this...Glad you enjoyed it..

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20 posted 2001-12-17 04:41 PM




CLAPPING WILDLY!!! BRAVO!!! YOU TWO MAKE A FABULOUS COLLABORATION WITH WORDS!!! (big hugggsssssss) This is soooooooo beautiful, sweet friends, I LOVE IT!!! You have such beautiful hearts, dearest Karen and Barry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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21 posted 2001-12-17 05:18 PM


Thanx Noah....now get yours turned in
and we will post another one....

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