Open Poetry #17 |
The value of my love |
walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
As you pack up to leave I know that I can stop you I know you love me but you don't appreaciate my love For me respect is important in love and I refuse to share your love You can call me selfish You can call me greety You can call it jealousy but your love is mine alone or not at all So even though I can stop you I don't want you back unless you learn the value of my love |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well written and well said. All or nothing at all! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
walker, Very true.. if she doesn't respect your feelings and love.. the best thing is to let her go. *huggles you* Hugs, Tara "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
Very well sadi.If they don't respect your feelings then it only causes hurt. Peaches |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Very well put. Love is all or nothing.....for its value is priceless and rare. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(big hugggssssss) Soooooooo brilliantly expressed, dearest friend! (sigh) Love is a priceless gift that needs much comfort and caring, and you deserve the most beautiful and compassionate love your heart could ever dream for! (sigh) May true love forever glisten in your heart, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
good for you!!!!! not an easy poem to write, i'm sure, but this piece has the strength of words needing to be spoken.... |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Very well said, walker, and words to live by. Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
it's not greedy at all walker! You deserve it all! well written |
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