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walker
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0 posted 2001-12-17 07:34 AM



As you pack up
to leave
I know that I can
stop you
I know you love me
but you don't appreaciate
my love
For me respect is
important in love
and I refuse to share
your love
You can call me
selfish
You can call me
greety
You can call it
jealousy
but your love is mine alone
or not at all
So even though
I can stop you
I don't want you back
unless you learn the value
of my love


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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2001-12-17 09:39 AM


Well written and well said.  
All or nothing at all!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

rosepetals25
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2 posted 2001-12-17 09:51 AM


walker,

      Very true.. if she doesn't respect your feelings and love.. the best thing is to let her go.  *huggles you*

Hugs,
Tara

"My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read"
     - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home

peaches73533
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3 posted 2001-12-17 10:12 AM


Very well sadi.If they don't respect your feelings then it only causes hurt.
Peaches

Startime
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4 posted 2001-12-17 10:16 AM


Very well put. Love is all or nothing.....for its value is priceless and rare. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

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5 posted 2001-12-17 06:41 PM




(big hugggssssss) Soooooooo brilliantly expressed, dearest friend! (sigh) Love is a priceless gift that needs much comfort and caring, and you deserve the most beautiful and compassionate love your heart could ever dream for! (sigh) May true love forever glisten in your heart, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Walker, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

doreen peri
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6 posted 2001-12-17 07:30 PM


good for you!!!!! not an easy poem to write, i'm sure, but this piece has the strength of  words needing to be spoken....


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7 posted 2001-12-17 07:48 PM


Very well said, walker, and words to live by.  

Michael

Michael Auguste~
There is more depth to the heart than the mind can comprehend and it only has boundaries when we choose to fence it in.  

RosePetal
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8 posted 2001-12-17 08:02 PM


it's not greedy at all walker! You deserve it all! well written
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