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the muse |
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tearpearl Junior Member
since 2001-12-14
Posts 17 |
Twelve o’clock And zero, seven minutes past Look up again The seven is an eight Close my eyes Pull back my hair Daddy’s still awake Downstairs Seconds tick, minutes fly Look up again It’s one-o-nine Still awake No need to sleep Besides the creeping Burn in my eyes I have no use I have no point I just keep writing And blame it on the muse |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Writer's block grrrrr, doesn't time slip by faster when you want to get things accomplished? great post, thanks for sharing! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Sometimes the words just have to flow from pen to paper no matter the time on the clock. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Oksana, I know just how you feel, sometimes right after I have a dream, I have to write it down immediately, even if it's 4 in the morning, and I don't stop until I have every part of the dream down! (kiss on cheek) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, we all love your beautiful words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Oksana, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
just keep writing..... yes!!! the writing will fill the minutes with value |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
yep yep know what you mean I just found me muse again and i'm up late trying to get all I need to on paper. But I like it because I anit blocked any more. I breathe the dust, the dust is me. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling very well Oksana! And, when my muse gets ideas for writing something there is no stopping her. She hasn't been feeling well lately but I am sure she will be her old bubbly self soon. Good write. Hugs, Nancy.  "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Funny....I get a completely different picture from this poem.. At any rate, it is very well done |
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