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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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I keep with me a diary It is kept under lock and key For inside lies my innermost thoughts That are so very personal to me The only time I let my guard down Is when I take my pen in hand Then no longer do I have control As my heart seems to beg command As the conductor of my emotions My heart reveals the inner me As I open up my soul To reveal the person I've come to be Many people don't see this side of me Somewhat humble am I to reveal That I've become somewhat of a writer As my words help my heart to heal So often I feel very fragile It doesn't take much for the tears to flow Especially when consumed in my writing And my emotions just seem to overflow So much goodness has come from my writing And so many gifted poets I see Who also reveal their souls Unto the likes of you and me Suetang |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It's true, isn't it, that we DO reveal so much from ourselves. This is so honest and warm to read. Kathleen (Kay) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
It is so very true...even within the fantasies I weave is the heart and soul of me for all to see who have the eyes of a poet. **hugs** This poem is so very very good.  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Sue, your beautiful words always shine with beauty and love! (sigh) May your loving heart forever conduct sweet symphonies of music and poetry for all our ears, as your loving heart sings them! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend, we all love your lovely words! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Sue, I wish I could go to Starlite and get one of your first poems and put it right beside this wonderful piece, and show you the growth of your poetry. This was extremely well done, true and many can relate to this. It is OKAY to bare one's soul in their writing, for as I have said so many times - this therapy is absolutely free and so good for you. I really enjoyed your work in this one. Merry Christmas my dear young friend. ~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Sue...a beautiful write from you...thank you for posting..hugs ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Cool poem. Can't claim to have done much journaling, but I like the sentiments and emotion here.  |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
Very nicely said. I think poetry is a chance to let it all out, express your mind and heart, just all of your emotions. Poetry is a very magical subject. Randy Meador a life lived unexplored is a life not worth living. |
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thepoeticplumber Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 185 |
I think you wrote a wonderful poem about yourself, life, writing, and others. You covered a lot of ground in a short time. You have an abundance of love and feelings to spread to us Sue. God Bless You, Your friend Rog [This message has been edited by thepoeticplumber (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
When the blood from out my heart Makes its way down through my pen And mingles with the ink to form The words I want to send...... Yes, that's what happens. You explain it well, miss |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Well, where do I start....you are all so kind. Irish Rose Thank you and I'm glad you can relate to this. Karen Your words are always so much appreciated. Noah You are always so kind and lovely to me. Sharon You humble me with your words. Every now and again I look back to when I started and I feel I have grown and still love what I do. Victoria I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Larry Thanks for your kindness and support. Randy How nice of you to read this and I'm glad you enjoyed it. Roger Thank you my friend for taking time out to read this one and I'm sure you can relate to how I feel. Balladeer Thank you so much. Take care.......Sue Suetang |
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