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A Powerful Force
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A Powerful Force |
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Hypnosis Member
since 2001-12-02
Posts 325CO |
A Powerful Force by Randy Meador I approach the cliff heading full speed My body, in horror, goes stiff Everything is out of my hands There is nothing I can do Heading forcefully to the sands Not a soul on the earth I believed I knew Off the cliff I go Yelling, in my freefall to the unpleasant earth I then heard a voice say "no" Never had I heard such a beautiful voice since birth My fall stops in mid-air Finally I knew there is someoned who really cared This force that saved me was like no other It is strong, powerful, and irresistable It is your love. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* a poem as powerful as the voice of love of which you speak. I was held by the words of this poem that seem to flow into the perfect ending just right. I love it. Very well done. **hug**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
if love is real it can change us...helen |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Randy, I'm so happy that you feel this way; love is all you need to erase all your tears and fears away! (smiles) May you forever rest in joy and peace, sweet friend! (big huggssssss) We all love you so much, dearest friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Randy, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
Great work Randy!!!  . I enjoy reading your poetry. You're becoming an outstanding writer. Keep it up. Love Noelle |
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