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Takes Two - To Dance
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Takes Two - To Dance |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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“TAKES TWO – TO DANCE” by Bill Charles ~~~~ I hear music, and it stirs my mind, makes me want to dance, this night… But alas, not one will say yes, that I can hold, in the candlelight… Drums beat a melody, guitars play, rhythm drowns the atmosphere… My body sways, emotions crest, knowing that soon, she will appear… Then a yes said, for she is here, taking my hand, softly into hers… Together caressed, tightly as one, warmth like this, my being alters… We move slowly together, in harmony, passions stir, and we take a chance… Romance and pleasure, we have found, no words spoken, it takes two – to dance… ~~~~ [This message has been edited by Bill Charles (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* the soft sway of your words takes one in the dance. How incredibly beautiful this poem is. Your words show clearly the tenderness of the heart you have. Yes, it does take two..to dance. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes it does mr.romance...helen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bill darling boy this is truly fabulous, I know you are a master of your art but this is outstandingly good. Normally your writing is wonderful this is even better than normal. I'd ask you if you Tango but I'd bet you prefer the Rumba  (I can do a really good Tango)    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy   To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Indeed it does. Well done! |
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RosePetal
since 2001-08-26
Posts 2985South Florida |
Hi Bill, I like your new pic, very handsome. I love to dance, it would be an honor to have a dance with you. RP |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Bill, I'm in line right behind Rose Petal for that dance! Yes...very nice new pic as well. Enjoyed. Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) You are soooooo romantic, sweet friend, may you forever dance hand in hand with the love of your life and live happily together ever after in joys dance! (sigh) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is soooooo gorgeous! (big hugggsssss) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Well Sir, It would be my pleasure to take your hand to dance with you on the tunes of the band and as I'm about the same age as you I think we could make a swirl or two  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Bill...a very beautifully written romantic poem...thank you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Startime - hugs to you also, and my pleasure to read your reply. Thank you... 1slick_lady - words that you say are so very kind, I thank you... Marsha - I blush with your kindness to write the words that you have about this writing... As a matter of fact, give me the blues to dance to, a slow one, to hold one close... Interloper - I thank you for coming by for a read... RosePetal - you are very sweet to say what you did about the new photo. And I will ask you, for this dance... Enchantress - and you shall have that dance. Glad that you like the new photo... Mistletoe Angel - my friend, I hope that you are well, and with a smile on your face. I love to dance, and with that someone special... Titia - and it would be my pleasure to ask you for a dance, and I'm sure that we would swirl... Yes, please use it on your website. Do you need to have me do anything to post it??? Magnus - and I thank you for your warm reply... |
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