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Showing Me Love (Poet deVine’s challenge)
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Showing Me Love (Poet deVine’s challenge) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA 
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Showing Me Love The first time I heard you laugh I know that sound would forever Be locked into my memory. When I saw that wonderful smile I knew I would see it in my dreams Bring dreams of love and happiness When I felt your hand’s gentle caress I knew that I’d never feel that way again Never feel so cherished and beautiful For it was not into my ear you whispered But into my heart. It was not my lips you kissed, but my soul. Your love has claimed my very essence And showed me the joy of living once more Putting my shattered and disbelieving heart Back together piece by crumbled piece. So gently, so amazingly tenderly. Giving me more than I could ever dream of Showing me the mystery and myth of eternal love. "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" - Motley Crue, Home Sweet Home [This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 12-17-2001).] |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* how magnificent you make it all feel. Your heart has been touched and it is so clear that it is with a deep love that you have been healed. Wonderful. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Tara, this is stunning, my friend.  "For it was not into my ear you whispered But into my heart" I love that line and the truth it contains. Nice work, very nice! Michael Michael Auguste~ |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Karen - Thank you my friend for stopping in.. Michael - As much as I would LOVE to take credit for that line... *sighs* I can't lol. It is a line from a Judy Garland song. They are lovely lines though aren't they? Poet deVine's challange : /pip/Forum7/HTML/000398.html "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
This is beautifully done... regards, sudhir |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Tara! This is exquisite!! It's amazing that three of you have taken this challenge and we have three completely different poems. Wow. I love this!  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Beautiful! Well done! Deb |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sudir - Thank you. I'm glad you liked it Poet deVine - I didn't get to see the others yet.. but I will look It was a wonderful challange.. I love the lines BloomingRose - Thank you  "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Love CAN and does put all the pieces back together believe me. It truly does. I loved this btw. Kathleen (Kay) |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Irish Rose - Yes it certainly can. My heart was so broken.... I thought I'd never move on. David showed me differently though.. I didn't stand a chance *chuckles* He is wonderful.. and he has made me stronger than I thought I could be. Thank you for stopping in *hugs* "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
"Mystery and myth" - Interesting combination. Well done, indeed |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
rosepetals,this is a breathtaking write about love.Fantastic!     Juanita |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
This is wonderful, romantic, and breathtaking.Nicely done. peaches |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Tara, this is beautiful! A challenge well met! Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet Tara! (big hugggssssss) May you forever find and smile with the beauty of eternal love forever! (kiss on cheek) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet friend, this made me smile! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tara, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Interloper - I'm glad you liked it Thanks for stopping in.Juanita - Thank you I'm happy you enjoyed. Peaches - It was a great challange .. a very inspiring challange.. what can I say Thank you.Nancy - Thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it Noah - You are the romantic one my friend. Very few write romance as well as you *hugs*  "My heart is like an open book, for the whole world to read" |
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dawn to dusk Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 68Colorado |
I'de like to thank you for your warm welcome into the forum. This being the first poem I've ever read of yours I was impressed. I wish my poem could have sounded somewhat more like yours. Nice job. . Noelle |
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