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Exhaling Love
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Exhaling Love |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Exhaling Love ~*Marge Tindal*~ You are the very breath of me inhaled in whispered moments of desire Stoking the embers into a roaring flame Exhaling of love ... on sighs of realize You are my love on fire~ I burn with the touch of you branded with the singe in heated rise Feather-fingered tease of please Tempered in the touching am I Exhaling love through blazing sighs~ Breathe me in so deeply I am ready for the explore Come on baby ... light my fire and then, over again ... do it once more~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge, sweet sister...my mouse is smoking..This poem is in fire! I have a feeling that you have been inspired...GOOD! |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Marge! Exquisite! My goodness. *Peace you. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'You are the very breath of me inhaled in whispered moments of desire Stoking the embers into a roaring flame Exhaling of love ... on sighs of realize You are my love on fire' May I just say, whoa...this is so far beyond passionate! But, I absolutely love it...into the library for sure! sp   And did you know with the rain in your pockets, |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
A passionate piece..... Lovely as always dear Marge Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
WOW!!!! Now this is truly hot. Magnificently sensual writing, Marge. Someone sure has lit your fire. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh Marge you write 'passion' so well!! This is hot! But, done with finesse.  ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl darling sister of my heart, this is wonderful, call the fire brigade. I said you suited being in love darling girl. ONE OF YOUR BEST. In a repertoir that boasts nothing that is not superb this eclipses even your usual diamonds.As always Mushy To give light to them that sit in darkness..... to guide our feet into the way of peace St John ch2 v1 [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 12-16-2001).] |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
Tssss...CALIENTE!!!!  (I picked the smile jusdt cause of the flames.) -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Good lawwwwdy ...I think Margie is about to spontaniously combust   Cajun spice and oh so nice... The pretty blue flame has Margie singed and sighing *smiling at you* and your lusty muse LOL |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sounds like fun Marge...James |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
What else could I add? Wow! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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misguided angel Member
since 2001-11-23
Posts 106Australia |
Marge, may I say "yeah, what they said!" Lol Love to see you in love Andrea Summon the courage to step out of your familiar rut and suddenly many of those things which held you back will no longer have the power to do so. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- Oh my...if there was snow here, it would have just melted.  This is soooooo steamy and romantic. I LOVE IT! I especially love this line... "Feather-fingered tease of please" What a 'Classic Marge' line that is. Have I mentioned how happy I am for you? Love you bunches,  ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truly met the poet. ~vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (12-18-2001 11:59 AM).] |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
 regards, sudhir |
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Alyssa
since 2001-05-30
Posts 385IM ENGAGED!!!!! |
ahhhhhhhhh i love this its sooooo good! ....Handle with care... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
You have just given my mouse 3rd degree burns Do it to me one more time Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
This poem is hot like fire....whew! Poetry is spiritual ventilation! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Marge, woo hoo! Let me say woo hoo! Too cool this is...I LOVED it!Sauni @~~~>~~ |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Marge, breath deep, my friend Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Wow, Marge! This is just beautiful. And, so romantic. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
*Thanks to each of you for expressing your pleasure with this piece of of my heart-spill~ I am inspired by a 'BIG LOVE' ... happy to share my thoughts with you~ Vicky~ 'Feather-fingered tease of please' You do it almost EVERY time ... my favorite too~ Mirror-Mirror ! ! *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* Marge what a passionate piece .....Love it ((hugs)) Charisma |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
applause.....thunderous applause..... |
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