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A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2001-12-19 10:57 AM

Hush...the screams of silence. As
emptiness fills the room, darkness
steals the light.

Corners move in closer, reaching
for the other, doorframes move
in quickly, untill they are no more.

Growing in size, finding no breath.
Strangled by the pain of fear...SOMEONE
GET ME OUT OF HERE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2001-12-19 11:07 AM

i was stuck in an elevator once..but only for five minutes..in a hospital..i was doing volunteer work at the time..but i didnt panic..they got me out along with three others. Nicely done Annie..nice to hear from you again...hugss, Happy Holidays to you

~Victoria~

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2001-12-19 12:02 PM

Annie, I'm with you on this one! I have a bit of claustrophobia, and will not use an elevator unless necessary. This is a vivid description of a panic attack. LOL, it's much more interesting to read it than feel it.

Soleil Noir
Senior Member

since 2001-12-19

Posts 688
USA

3 posted 2001-12-19 12:18 PM

There are times one wants to hide, but you've given one every reason to NOT hide in a closet...

thank you!

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

4 posted 2001-12-19 12:21 PM

exactly how I would feel if I got stuck, I don't even like them that much to start with!
Enjoyed.

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

(I could have missed the pain, but I'd have had to miss the dance~Garth)

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

5 posted 2001-12-19 12:56 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Annie, I know just how you feel, and elevators too scare me all the time. (sigh) I would always take the stairs if I could! (big hugggssssss) Soooooo emotionally powerful, sweet Annie, your words are always such a pleasure to read! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Annie, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Duncan
Member Ascendant

since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

6 posted 2001-12-20 05:26 PM

Corners move in closer, reaching
for the other, doorframes move
in quickly, untill they are no more.

This is very good, Annie.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

7 posted 2001-12-20 05:38 PM

Thank you everyone.
A very frightening experience for one who is claustrophobic.
Glad you enjoyed this.

ever deep...runs
the wishing well
for fairytale illusions

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