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Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

0 posted 2001-12-16 07:02 PM

Weeping as my tears emerges
Each tear leaves the others
Running down my sorrowful face
I am crying for a lost tear
For it cannot return to the same place

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

[This message has been edited by Daniel J D (edited 12-16-2001).]

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2001-12-16 07:05 PM

*sigh* I felt a tear slide down my cheek as I read this poem...your sadness comes through very well. My heart goes out to you. **hugs**

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

amusemi
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

2 posted 2001-12-16 07:06 PM

What a thought!!! Would we want to put them back? I am always relieved when I can finally cry. It is the release of all that which should never be kept.

The thought of putting it back never crossed my mind.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-12-16 07:14 PM

My sweet friend, I have never thought of a tear this way. But yes, you cannot put them back once they are shed! In my heart, I know they serve a purpose.....they must..

Kathleen (Kay)
"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

4 posted 2001-12-16 07:18 PM

(big hugggsssssss) Oh Daniel, my heart cries out to you and your tears! (sad sigh) I pray with all my heart that joy and hope will again sparkle to your tears and you can again smile soon! (sigh) All our hearts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so very much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Daniel, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

5 posted 2001-12-16 07:21 PM

Oh Daniel I love this as it makes me think. Love poems that make me stop and ponder.
Hugs, Nancy.

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

6 posted 2001-12-16 10:45 PM

"I am crying for a lost tear
For it cannot return to the same place"

to return our tears back?....
Crying is a relief as amusemi explained but I know it's not always so. There are times when it makes us feel worse and we regret our tears....

A sad heartfelt write.....and beautifully done..

Thank you
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rebekah33
Member

since 2001-12-13

Posts 140
MD/NJ

7 posted 2001-12-16 11:20 PM

You speak such a wise (but yet unthought of) sediment. Great piece!
-R.

"So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain

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