Open Poetry #17 |
Earth Angel...Challenge..You are There |
Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
My earth angel softly whispered "Is he worthy of you my dear?" and I listened with a heavy heart an angel whispered "Oh! no.. no.. no" "ride the waves of indecision or you will drown in an ocean of tears" you are there but here with me a light wrapped around my soul hugging me everywhere I roam I see your tiny fingerprints upon my golden comb sometimes upon my windowpane when I am all alone an image of you combing your hair beside the night light in my room a silken strand of blonde hair upon my pillow.. satin white an earth angel is watching over me from sunrise to moonlight you are there but here with me watching out for my destiny my earth angel..my angel of love Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. Pablo Picasso [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) You are sooooooo romantic, sweet Victoria, the beauty of earthly angelic love shines in your lovely verse! (smiles) May your angel forever enfold you in his hearts wings forever! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Noah..for peeking in again today and for your sweet comments ~Victoria~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, soft and sweet, beautiful images. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh this is simply beautiful. Very appropriate for Christmas. Happy holidays Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you kethry and Sandra..nice to hear from you both...happy holidays to you...hugss ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Victoria, What a cool use of the challenge. How come I didn't think of that? I really liked this. Nice touch! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Larry..actually i wrote this the day before yesterday..and just added that one line in...i wasnt going to post it until i saw the challenge and i thought it fit the bill haa... Happy you enjoyed.. ~Victoria~ |
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