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In Less Time Than The Blink Of Your Eye
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In Less Time Than The Blink Of Your Eye |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Give me but a microsecond of your life. For..in that time you will know, will feel. You will experience the great warmth. You will be within the softest place. Like a message at the speed of light. The whisk of a comet through space. A meteor hurtling toward earth. Love will enter you, will ever remain. This tiny moment, just a small dot will become your life’s joy, fulfill you. Your needs will wane, will not again be. Two hearts will share, become as one. Like Cupid...my bow is strung..waits. The arrow of love ever sharp and true. This man’s thoughts bide here inside for my target is just you...only you.. [This message has been edited by Magnus (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I think you have become the resident romantic  *SIGH* this is wonderful!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I totally agree with Sea...Your romantic words from a loving heart make all the hearts here swoon with longing. Reading this poem is the most perfect way for me to start my day. **hugs**   Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. [This message has been edited by Startime (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Soooooooo beautiful, sweet friend! (sigh) That's what's the most beautiful magic of love is; it can happen in the blink of an eye and it can happen when you least expect it, to strike your heart with joy forever! (big hugggssssss) Love again shines from your heart and graces these blue pages, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Now, you know Barry, I like you very much. Do you also know this is refreshing to read after facing a mob at the shopping mall!! Well, everything will be wrapped later but this is so wonderful to read. For some reason, I feel new hope today and I haven't felt that in a long time. It's good to read someone's words knowing that they have love in their heart for those in their life and put it into such beautiful poetry for everyone to share. Forgive me for rambling, I often do that.....rambling rose and all you know? Kathleen (Kay) |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Barry! After a day of wrapping this is nice and relaxing....and life is as I always say, 'over in the blink of an eye'. Well done....Mr Romance! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Like this...James |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
"for my target is just you...only you.." And what a target..!! Such a wonderful piece .... I really loved it.... Thank you ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sue...thankx mucho...I do thoroughly enjoy writing romance...Resident Romantic? I am not sure about that ...there are some pretty good ones here.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Karen...are you and Sue collaborating together? I am glad you girls are enjoying this.. Tis fun... thanx bunches.. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Noah...thanx again for your ever faithful and warm responses. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Kay...you are not rambling...just expressing wonderful feelings... IF I can give you that feeling of hope and warmth...I will write until I die to allow you and others to have that.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Gosh Nancy...do I ever write anything that you don't sigh over? Maybe I should try so that you can have a normal day.... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
JM...thank you much...you always respond favorably... |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
My Enchanted...I wish I knew your name...or could remember it... Thank you very much for your warm reply... Makes my heart feel good.. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
So romantic, Barry and so very well written.    copyright2001 Lyra Nesius |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx much Madam C....happy you enjoyed this little post... |
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