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Rain Dance of Sin
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Rain Dance of Sin |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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You are the warrior in the wind tormenting your soul close the stars in your eyes feel beauty of Gods earth take control feel warm hoofs of the sun gallop upon your skin echoing within the rain cleansing a rain dance of sin fingers of life within wisdom of your hair tomorrow may never come but spirits of love will be there hear the drums of prayer beating softly within your heart in the wilderness of fear faith will never part silhouettes of bald eagles gently dance upon the moon like a warrior and a maiden soaring in loves eternal bloom listen to songs of the Gods in jaded rains of life's fountains while the wing span of an eagle gently lifts thunder in your heart beyond each majestic mountain. Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 BRAVO!!! Yes, may we all hold faith and love in our heart and soar above majestic mountains and into the wings of our Loving Lord! (smiles) Soooooo breathtakingly beautiful, sweet Victoria, we all love you so very much! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Victoria, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* absolutely stunning. You paint a vision with your words that is mystical and fill with ageless magic. *sigh* I was transported to a time and place were the spirit of the earth still sings in perfect harmony. Absolutely magnificent. I love it. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
OMG, rain dance of sin? You go, girl! You know one of these days, I'm going to dig out the stuff I am too shy to post  keep those warrior words coming and I shall read.  Kathleen (Kay) |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Victoria - I would love to dance in the rain. Most vivid images you portray... BC |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Great imagry here...liked this very much!! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Victoria, This is an amazing write. I love it!! ~Hugs, Nancy~ "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Stunning.....I love the imagery within....beautiful...beautifully done! Charisma ~*Theresia~* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you dear folks...so happy you enjoyed...Hugss to all...  ~Victoria~ Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"hear the drums of prayer beating softly within your heart in the wilderness of fear faith will never part" "listen to songs of the Gods in jaded rains of life's fountains while the wing span of an eagle gently lifts thunder in your heart beyond each majestic mountain." Victoria, the imagery in this poem is fantastic! I'll keep this one to read again. thank you so much for sharing this vision. May the ripple of LOVE |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Midnitesun..i wrote this a while back but never posted it..thank you for peeking in...appreciate your sweet comments.. ~Victoria~ |
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