Open Poetry #17 |
Traveling Heart |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Mind traveling south heart following on ethereal notes floating, soaring on dove's wings, across meadows and streams over hill and dale, to the one I love whose soul lies under majestic Rockies capped in white above emerald green vallies. My heart lies hidden between soft arches and rocky cliffs of golden sunset, kissed by morning dew, and the sounds of thunder crashing over rivers of white foam. Fill the empty spaces of me with magical cascading notes of Kitaro, Tchaikovsky, Beethoven and Bach like pristine waterfalls from the heavens above lifting my spirit beyond the realm of earthly existence, filling the crevices of me with purest joy, and ecstasy. Wrapping my heart and soul as a snug glove fits the hand on a cold wintry day. Somewhere, out there, is my Love. A soul and heart whose song is sung for my ears alone, whose compassion and Love will wipe away all tears and swallow all the fears that have followed me for years. His heart is true. Both golden and of rainbow hue It is you I adore For now, forevermore. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOW! You make me wish the Rockies extended down to Florida! but they don't beautiful writing, sun |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, What wonderful imagery. I know it all so well...right up to that long haired list of names and then you lost me. But the rest of it is awesome. You deserve the best and more...like: Simon and Garfunkel, Elton John and Eric Clapton! But, what do I know? LOL The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Balladeer, thank you so much! You are so sweet. I only had three lines of this written down, this rest just came as I listened to Kitaro's "Ancient" CD. If you don't know Kitaro's music, this is his 2001 CD, and it is awesome music. And as for my heart? The one I wrote this for knows where my heart is tonight, even though we are miles apart. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
This reads like a beautiful fairytale of longing. The imagery is very good. Enjoyed alot, Kacy. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Larry. So nice to see you tonight. Go to your local music store and treat yourself to Kitaro. You will never regret it, and neither will Nancy. |
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JoMason Member
since 2001-12-07
Posts 57 |
Midnitesun, Classical music your spirit does fill. Making wonderful words flow from your quill. That wonderful love for whom you are waiting, Some day soon your heart will be sating. Jo Mason 12/10/01 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Yes mam! Think they'll play it first? The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Duncan, so glad to see you here tonight. thank you for your reply. Hope your dog is doing well. And Love? |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Jo, thank you! I love this music, it makes my heart sing almost as much as the man in my dreams. Larry, I can honestly say there isn't a bad Kitaro. But go for "Ancients" if you can get it. It will put you in another dimension. and if you do not like it, I will buy it from you. Also try music from Tangerine Dream...anything. Guaranteed, beautiful music. |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Wow! Midnitesun1 You make me long for nothern skies, make me think of towering masses of rock and ice. What must be the sound of ice breaking on a river in the spring, or chunks of an overextended glacier breaking off and crashing in to the sea? I can no longer get much from music. They must sound like thunder. If it rumbles, roars, crashes or thunders, and if it is loud enough, you can bet that I will here. These days, in a thunderstorm, thunder is felt long before it is loud enough to hear it. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Amazing write Kacy! Great imagery! Hugs, Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Oh, Jaime, if I could make it rumble loud enough to be heard that far, it would probably scare half the planet. Perhaps a smaller emailed rumble? Actually, I've never heard the glaciers tumble into the sea, except on a PBS video. Perhaps next year I'll visit the majestic Alaska coast, and hear the roaring sea. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Hello Nancy! Thank you for visiting. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
you got me with the cascading music of Tchaikovsky, Beethoven and Bach i'm there!!!! thank you for this... i enjoyed it very much |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, I looked tonight. But guess it didn't start with a "t", huh? You know I'm struggling on this one... By the way, I only listen to jazz, except when Nancy is home. Rattle and hum? The past is history and the future is a mystery, but today is a gift and that is why it is the present! [This message has been edited by Larry C (edited 12-11-2001).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Midnitesun, Well it didn't sound like ice fishing to me but I enjoyed. Nice work. *L* |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Kitaro. . . perfect music for this. . . well done my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
See now, Sven has me worried... |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Doreen, so glad to help you smile with some tunes. Sven, so you like Kitaro too? Awesome music. Seymour, LOL, the ice fishing house currently sits in the empty horse stall. Larry, Rattle and Hum, U2? Sara is watching that concert DVD right now. And do you like Keith Jarrett???? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Wow, now do I feel really old. She changed her IM to that tag. Never heard of it and thought she had finally made you a new account. ROTFLMAO |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, Sara didn't tell me she changed her MSN name. Tomorrow I'll set up an MSN for myself. Account name? Don't know yet. Maybe Loon? |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, As in Loony Toon? LOL |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yes and no, I still like those old toons, and I'm not Daffy either. Loon, as in that mysterious magical red-eyed creature of the lakes and the coast. |
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N orth Carolina Girl Senior Member
since 2001-12-04
Posts 962NC,USA |
Midnitesun,this sounds like love. Juanita |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Wow ... (left speechless and swaying to the music) !!!!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
NC girl, it does, doesn't it? Craig(?) it is Craig not Chris, right? Wow, thanks! I'm very glad you enjoyed it. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Kathleen, I love it! travel on! Kathleen (Kay) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Why thank you, Kathleen. Love paves the way and brightens the day. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Kacy! LOL...Read it again...still love it! Just had to tell you I can't stop laughing at the moosehide bikini you're sending Larry for Christmas!!! LOL....HUGS for making my day! Nancy. "A dream is a wish your heart makes..." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nancy, thank you! Wow, a second time around. You've made my day brighter. LOL, Larry probably hasn't seen that bikini reply yet. I'm happy to make you smile |
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Apachecat906 Member
since 2001-09-04
Posts 217Michigan, USA |
Midnitesun, Thanks for reminding me how much I miss my Rockies. There is something about the mountains that stirs up all the life you have inside and makes you shiver with its wonder. Your poem did too. Guess love can do the same thing to a person. Great job, I loved it! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Apachecat, that is a beautiful reply and a great complement. Thank you. I'll bet you do miss the Rockies. Hope you get to travel (safely) to those majestic peaks soon. (Me too!) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) You are soooooooo romantic, sweet Kacy, this beautiful poem sings with symphonic waterfalls and rising suns of glowing love! (sigh) I hope you find him soon and forever share eternal happiness between your heart and his! (sigh) Sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, your beautiful words always amaze me! (kiss on cheek) You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah, you have such a sweet kind romantic heart! Thanks for your wishes. I found him, I just can't be with him just yet. But I have learned the virtue of patience, as long as it gets out of my way real soon....LOL Thanks for the extra hugs. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Midnitesun, This was such a treat to find and the imagery is awesome, you have painted a real gem here and I really enjoyed it, thank you. And it is a pleasure to meet you as well. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you for the warm reply, Cerenity. Sometimes my muse takes the pen or keyboards and I sit back and let the words flow, a silent observer. |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Absolutely breathtaking Kacy, thanks for a really nice read tonight. ~*~ May the spirit of this season live in your heart all year through ~*~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you so much Mysteria! And thanks for those email instructions. I will attempt to add a photo and music to one of my next poems. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Minite--Isn't it wonderful how the heart can travel across great distance! Much enjoyed this poem! |
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