Open Poetry #17 |
Way under ( twenty or less for Mark) |
Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Time for Unity. See WE not ME. May the ripple of LOVE become the wave of PEACE [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
BRAVO!!! OH MY GOSH, THIS SHORT POEM SAYS SO MUCH, IT'S WONDERFUL!!! (big hugggsssss) I just know Mark will cherish this and love you forever! (sigh) Such a beautiful declaration of love, sweet friend, I love it! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
BRAVO!!!!This is the perfect response to Mark. Very well done. **hugs** Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Noah and Startime, thank you! The shortest written version would be: WE not ME. If I could make the well-known international cancellation symbol, I would just put ME in a circle with that diagonal line through it. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Brilliant! this one gave me a gasp and a chuckle... |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...or perhaps "I" with a slash through it...? Very cool, Kacy -- thank you for the thought. The sentiment is one to consider, apply, and promulgate, to be sure. -MVS "Your focus determines your reality." --Qui-Gon from The Phantom Menace |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Or, as we say in the south (where our outhouses do NOT freeze) we'uns Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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peaches73533 Senior Member
since 2001-11-04
Posts 981OK, USA |
So much said for so little words.United we stand holding each other hand in hand. Peaches |
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rebekah33 Member
since 2001-12-13
Posts 140MD/NJ |
What a perfect poem as we stand together as a country! -R. "So stop and love and dance and live and laugh until you cry" Edwin McCain |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you everyone, for sharing this. It is a simple message we can all take to heart. And Mark? I like that! Nothing is shorter than "I" crossed out. Thanks for the inspiration. Now let's go "fight" some battles with that as our standard. |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Kacy, Ya' know for a yakker you sure have mastered brevity! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Yakker? Yes, sometimes I can yak. Tonight I can't. |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I love brevity...and your message is perfect! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, Duncan. You always set a fine example, with the brevity of your work. |
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