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A River Runs Through My Heart
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A River Runs Through My Heart |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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I hope you like it cause it's been a very long drought around here and thank you for stopping by, A River Runs Through My Heart Riding the river of life through heart land of my soul, come all and reside a while give my heart a chance to grow you’ll like what comes your way. Ever present with cheerful glee tending all who need me, want so for visitors to stay but knowing well they may have to ride other currents come what may. On many occasion my river runs to over-flowing spilling out-ward lifting spirit to such delightful splendid high’s giving my soul pleasure. Something pleasing always a gain things lost to troubles way ride river never seen again, often drought runs very deep and even to the very marrow! That’s when I bring to attention all the blessings over looked, at times heavy heart’s depression can capsize the balance in me loosing my tranquillity. So please if you come to visit plan staying forever and a day, the floodgates of my heart will never close on you this I promise for I’m nothing without you. A river run’s through my heart a universe of soul’s I’m just dying to meet and share the special blessings that only friendship imparts. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 12-15-2001).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Cerenity, this is great, it's nice to read your poetry again...  |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I like the friendship you offer here, that you do not close the floodgates, but let the river flow unimpeded. Very well done. May the ripple of LOVE |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Sounds like a great place where my roots could take sunshine on my face for Happiness sake This river at rest your Tranquility a place all do quest and forever be Enjoyed and look forward to more! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Sooooooooo beautiful, sweet Ellen, I love this beautiful gift of friendship! (big hugggsssssss) You are an angel to us all, and we'll always be happy to explore the river of your heart through your lovely words! (kiss on cheek) We all love you so much, sweet friend! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ellen, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Cerenity - thank you for bringing a smile to a heart that was in need of one this morning. A river run’s through my heart a universe of soul’s I’m just dying to meet and share the special blessings that only friendship imparts. A most beautiful verse, friendships are very special. And you write as if you know that they are... BC |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*giggling* I was going to put the same verse that Bill did in my reply and then I saw his... He is so right, friendship is a precious treasure and should be treated with love. I love the way this poem feels and sings like a flowing river. Magnificent. **hugs**  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Sweet girl ... this is a stunning write~ Gentle flow from verse to verse~ 'So please if you come to visit plan staying forever and a day, the floodgates of my heart will never close on you this I promise for I’m nothing without you.' How lovely ~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Cerenity, it is good to see your words again.....and how beautiful they are!! *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free. |
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Carol Luna Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 55 |
I like this very, very much. I;m just an old river gal myself ! Carol Luna |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Hi there, glad you are back on the write again. I missed you. Friends still we are though miles are far I'll not forget such kindnes met Luv ya Sandra |
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